How I trolled my enemy

if you can't stand them,trick them!confuse them!

Challenging me to enter the battlefield and exhibit my skills,

That gruesome enemy stepped back.

While her face evinced the feelings of disgust and 

Clearly gave out the signals that she was underestimating us in every possible way.

What armour?Do I have one?

Are you already under an absurd impression that I am the female version of that Greek hero Achilles?

Which battlefield?Trojan war seems to be a simile redundant enough to serve the purpose of competition.

When I  am even nowhere near Troy but simply sitting upon that sombre sofa in the recreation room.

 When they hurl challenges at me,I have this very bad habit of saying "Bring it on"

This peculiar provocation was not exempted from my common practise.

        I looked into her grotesque eyes filled with contempt and sat erect facing her with an outrageous confidence.

Looking into the eyes of my partner sitting beside,I started the duel--A duel of words!

Contempt was still lurking here and there around her dreadful bearing,

              Expecting us to die,drown and diminish.

 But my scream and loudness,vigour and energy shook her badly

She sat erect and started judging my words intently.

            Having no public fright,I could examine those expressions

They were boiling hot somewhere ,against my passion

      

 Speaking under one breath,I concluded confidently with a thank you

Eyeing her the same way,

contempt to contempt,disgust to disgust instead of sword to sword.

I looked around and the room sprang up applauding upon my victory

         My pals and others did see what my enemy could not see

   She did see that I could exhibit "something"

Praised me---------------------- by adding a "but"

,this but enabled me to understand her psychology,

            How insecured was she actually ,even though I was just rehearsing

and tricked her by not presenting the final speech;D

 

Author's Note

I tried this today and succeeded

Reviews

[613]

I loved the overall look of this poem. (The changing of the font sizes was a great touch). I believe that added to the intensity of the piece. I truly enjoyed this! Keep on writing!

- Brittney

[fattycbreezy52]

thanks a lot.I am seriously glad that you enjoyed it:)

[613]

You're welcome!

[Tom McRoberts]

I adore this. Shamelessly modern in topic, tone and presentation.

[fattycbreezy52]

and you have got it correct.Thanks a lot :) you are a sweetheart:)

[Lydia Shutter]

I like the changes in font size and boldness...and the italics. It really emphasized your words. People who judge us are usually the ones who are insecure. They bolster their own egos by putting others down. Best not to allow them to get under your skin....which it seems you have learned. A write of empowerment. I liked it. Lydi**

[fattycbreezy52]

absolutely correct and I am glad that I could master this art of empowerment.
Thanks for the review:)