He is our "Dylan"

He is our "Dylan"

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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A tribute to Dylan.love this guy

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Accurate angle
And that quintessential arching of the frangible skull
With enormous,exuberant eyes reduced to an archetypal nanoscopic sharpness
and a splendid guitar in hand ,
Describes the most admirable figure ,Bob Dylan

There he goes romping around
With his perfectly disheveled mahogany locks having a sheen of crushed velvet
Falling into his dark moon eyes
The way this hair would fall while energetically playing that guitar 
Was the reason for which a large number of half-witted girls committed suicide.

He sings spontaneously
He has rehearsed before 
But not wasting-my-energy-in-another-practise-session-kind of guy.
He believes in making an unpremeditated art!
There he goes,
Trying to keep the frost bite and winter chills
From nipping at my nose and preventing an untimely cold

The unique clickety-clack of his 1960 boots
Still haunts the words in my songs and melody
He is still treading the path in that mystical village
And behind him can be heard a great hue-and cry "You rock Dylan"

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
thanks for reading it.He has the most amazing hair in the history of music(and musicians)

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I very good write that you have done here. The words and phrasing here is so good. Descriptive and original, I very much like this style. Its so different than what I do. By the Way I saw Bob Dylan perform at the Austin City Limits Festival in 2007. It was great my friend an I traveled there and went for the entire weekend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Omg! ! thanks a lot:)
And you are lucky. You got to see a live performance.
He is, in.. read more
'You rock, Dylan'. No, you rock, Fatty. Lovely piece, a great portrait of a great performer!

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Thanks buddy;) I am a rockstar... (nananananana)
An outstanding poem! You've written this so well. Personally, I've never read such a good descriptive poem. Hats off! :)

Accurate angle
And that quintessential arching of the frangible skull
With enormous,exuberant eyes reduced to an archetypal nanoscopic sharpness
and a splendid guitar in hand ,
Describes the most admirable figure ,Bob Dylan
What an amazing description. I loved the imagery. I could picture Dylan so clearly on the stage bent in concentration over his guitar. The choice of words is excellent. Superbly written! :)

There he goes romping around
With his perfectly disheveled mahogany locks having a sheen of crushed velvet
Falling into his dark moon eyes
Beautifully written again. Perfect selection of words. I was saying ''Wow, wow, wow!'' throughout. :)
The way this hair would fall while energetically playing that guitar
Was the reason for which a large number of half-witted girls committed suicide.
''This hair'', ''that guitar'' - I'll repeat, fantastic choice of words. :) Crediting his hair for his fan following is a good idea and describing the girls commiting suicide as ''halfwitted'' is an even better one. :D Nicely expressed. :)

The unique clickety-clack of his 1960 boots
Still haunts the words in my songs and melody
He is still treading the path in that mystical village
And behind him can be heard a great hue-and cry "You rock Dylan"
Awesome ending. I especially liked ''the clickety clack of his 1960 boots'' - beautifully written.

You're literally a rocking poetess. Your poems are always refreshing and uniquely flavoured. Keep writing more and more. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

And you are a charm that grows powerful everyday. You are an amazing person who understands me the w.. read more
Bushra Naqshbandi

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome and I'm glad if I make you smile with my reviews. Believe me, I'm totally honest.. read more

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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