Olive Lover

I would have consumed the oil extracted,

Had he only been as beneficial as that Mediterranean olive

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a sumptuous collaboration, and brilliant train of thought! Great job, Breezy girl!

Your India is most beautiful!

[fattycbreezy52]

haha thanks a lot Kelly from my side and also India's;D:)

[Deepak Belbase]

Reading this I was feeling like a Hungary Dog! Bhow! Bhow!
I can't help to move to my refrigerator again!

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha!Or may be you will go out of olive stock very soon:D

[Deepak Belbase]

i think so... ;-)

[Jamestown]

Yum yum and more yum!
Dang it olives it is, totally your fault, lol:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes, I would take the blame for olives anyday;)
Thanks a lot haha!:)

[~]

What an avid connoisseur of food you've suddenly become dear breezy :D
i love olives!

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha exactly.That's what i am thinking about too;D

[wordman]

dam, that was a shut down for that boy,loved it

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha thanks :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A short and reflective metaphoric verse with a hint of melancholy that flows with emotion and disappointment.

[fattycbreezy52]

Thanks for the review John!:)

[ANTO]

If you can class employing a tissue as an extraction technique ~
The best things are always classed by someone as being non-beneficial.
Ah this recalls my days as a male-erotic dancer - the oil would ruin my armani jeans - but when I woke up and smelled the coffee I was still just me - not Adonis.

[fattycbreezy52]

Ahem ahem! The vision of you being a male-erotic dancer is what intrigues me:D

[ANTO]

Alas Adonis was just a nickname that my cousin gave me when I kept myself in shape - I think he was jealous ;p

[fattycbreezy52]

You mean which Adonis. .Shakespeare's Venus and Adonis? Right?

[ANTO]

I think thats what he meant. He was often drunk and could have meant anything when he called me Adonis - he was a champion boxer - he could call me whatever he liked - I would always smile. ;p