Waking the white

Waking the white

A Poem by fattycbreezy52

My endeavour,
To wake the frozen life
Should not go in vain.
I am here,
Clad in the same colour
In fact,semi-clad.
Wearing an off shoulder gown,
Giving the Siberian air
A cheek-to-cheek air kiss.
I have come to resuscitate
That lost,viridescent felicity.
I have come as 
A mother,
To pamper the impotent snow,
Clinging to the apprehensive boughs.
I have come as a daughter,
With a stubborn attitude
Forcing her daddy,
The snow-clad turf
To wake up from his long sleep,
And take a stroll with her.
I have come as a bride,
All clad in this beautiful white
Waiting for her lover,
The woodchuck
To break the oath of hibernation,
And instead,unite with her in this youthful exuberance.
I have come for winter,
To give it a new life
Breaking the curse of that heartless and haughty cold.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


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fattycbreezy52
Thanks for reading

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This is a beautiful depiction of Spring in my mind as 'she' warms the land, but it also has overtones of fairytale and legend. This is beautifully written FCB. Adorable descriptions, told in a romantic voice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

8 Years Ago

Wow.Yes,it's still winter.Yet,upon rereading your first line,,I clearly got that in what way have yo.. read more
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Great one dear sweet breeze. I liked the picture painted in my mind. White - symbol of chastity, yet of cold and separation.. so many emotions evoked with the waiting.
lovely! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

8 Years Ago

Aha!Thanks for an equally lovely review Moon:)
I simply just liked this one...

Posted 8 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

8 Years Ago

Glad to know this Chris:)

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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