Inamorata

Just in case,

You have forgotten to furnish the cosmos

With more hunky-dory shades of beatitude and grace,

Do it fast.

It wouldn't be acknowledged colourless.

The crocheted grass is waving it's floral hand continuously

Asking for more of that burgeoning green,

From your kaleidoscopic,long skirt.

With flowers,

Come those teeheeing butterflies

Asking for just two colours-

Black and white,

Which they usually lack.

The hem of your skirt can adequately provide that.

The birds sitting on the rustic bench

Are twittering enviously.

Give them a colour or two,

Tinging their ecstasy 

With orange,blue and red.

The bench raises it's head

Crying out in pain.

Doesn't ask for more than a brown

Hence,transform it into a polished sorrel.

The flowers will take colours from the portion,

You have gleefully spread in air.

Hues have abandoned your alluring skirt,

Even then it's looking no less.

Give my shirt a lovely blue

Which is to represent every inch of masculinity.

Leave my pants transparent,

With you,I would hardly care about them.

Let us equally paint our dermal layers,

Merging together and becoming colourless.

Let us devote the shades of this skin

As a heartfelt charity

To the natural elements.

Nature has done much for us,

Making us meet and blessing our existence.

Let us be one today,

Let us unite the restless souls,

Painting them with an equal tone

While the only colour upon your skirt

Remains red,

the colour of our love.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading my kaleidoscopic creation

Reviews

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You have quite the pen, my friend, and your use of colour and bold font to delineate each section is excellent as is your attention to detail, matching the image and the words... in all our colours and differences, "Let us be one today"....fabulous write.

[fattycbreezy52]

Such a lovely way to appreciate a piece of art.Thanks FT.I am glad:)

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I agree...you describe it beautifully :D...you are welcome!!

[Einstein Noodle]

yes .. i agree with Lydia ..love the "skirt" in your second verse particularly ... very sensual and charming at the same time ... hundreds of years ago when music was written to glorify God the arguments were made as to which is the most important .. the music? or the words? ... it went back and forth like that for quite some time ... so which is more important? the rainbow or the words :) who can say ... ;)
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

I think both are equally important because without the rainbow one can never have the visual perception of giving a shape to the dull and boring words in a stale dictionary and without words, rainbow will deprive itself the privilege of making into the books of thoughtful poets' community like us:D
Thanks for the review. It's very encouraging and ever insightful:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .......... i agree ... they are woven inseparable!

[Lydia Shutter]

Beautiful mingling of nature and romance. Good personification and imagery. I think, though, the changes in font color were a bit overdone. Still, it did not take away from the meaning of your write. Lydi*

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha yes.That gaudy font was deliberate on my part.Thanks a lot Lydi.You are always encouraging:)