32 flavours

Vanilla,chocolate,strawberry

What would you love to choose?

The soft essence of vanilla will leave you astray.

That rough chocolate will be hard and difficult to penetrate

While strawberry would sting offering crimsons and roses.

But these are just flavours entirely.

Real love comes tasteless and transparent.

It is us who has to fill in the bag.

Ransack your laboratory,

Prepare the tastes.

Let your senses run errands,

And bless your pace.

Keep going until that color has been invented.

A color which has no existence in dictionaries

And not known by realists,in case.

Just dive deep into that jungle

And do not demand it from a store

Make and pack your own

Bring it urgently to a comfortable home.

Author's Note

take a moment to grasp this.....Thank you:)

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Very interesting & unusual approach to love & flavorings. I appreciate that you're striving to invent something completely new here (not just the flavors, but the way that love is defined). Here's an idea that might strengthen this message . . . instead of telling us about inventing new flavors, it could be fun to actually INVENT NEW FLAVORS & put them into your poem (Show, instead of telling). I don't expect you to change your poem based on this idea, but it's just something to keep in mind as you continue on to invent other new & unusual messages. All in all, very fresh & inventive.

[fattycbreezy52]

Wowww...I will definitely take your advice and I must say in this respect-"Work in Progress":D

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! must say i love the love in colors :) all kinds and flavors ... harmless as ice cream ... comfortable as home ... and why not let the imagination go wild ... like the blue berry ladies of Avatar ;) what ever inspired this one fatty? you must have stopped at the Baskin Robins right!?
E.

[fattycbreezy52]

Always:D Thanks a lot E for the review:)

[ANTO]

Theres no such thing as a one-size-fits-all, generic kind of love. Love by definition is unique to the lovers (ask a million people what love is and you'll get a million different takes on it). You laid out your ice-cream store out well here FcB.

I would have used 'blended' instead of 'invented' and I might have replaced 'tasteless' with a word that has less negative connotations - perhaps long the lines of 'virgin', or 'blank' maybe.
I do like the analogy to ice-cream though - who doesnt like ice-cream ??
:D

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lol......about loving ice-cream.......you made me think of fat-free love.....;)

[ANTO]

lol @ fat-free love... you mean fatty-free-love lol

I thought I was eating healthy the other week by eating frozen yoghurt instead of ice-cream. I proper pigged out on it thinking - why not its yoghurt - only to find out they (the stores) can call ice-cream "frozen yoghurt" if there is 5% yoghurt lol. I was so sad I finished the faux frozen yoghurt off lol

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lol@ your frozen foolishness......find some better snack like celery sticks or non-genetically modified reconstituted edible carbon....;)