The beginning

The beginning

A Poem by Buy The Ticket, Take The Ride
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This peom is about the progression of addiction

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They say don’t do it,

you're being dumb.

But I'll try a little bit,

just to make me numb.


This feeling is great

it simply dissolves my hate

my mind is in it's free-est state

but what, what will be my fate?


Kill, steal, cheat and lie

Just to keep me high

why must I do things so dumb,

Just so I can be a little numb?

© 2012 Buy The Ticket, Take The Ride


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Thank God, it ends on an optimistic note.
Its a great write. Really. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


concise and strong. beautiful words about a tragic cycle. well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the twist, when others are telling you something and you deny it, and in the end you admit they are right. I love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on March 26, 2012
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Tags: heroin, addiction

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Surviving addict. Self harm death suicide walking through hell, a retrospective account. Aspiring gonzo journalist/new age writer. more..

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