Falling

Falling

A Poem by Jane Doe

I'm falling,

falling for who?,

 

I'm falling,

falling for you,

but I know it can't be true,

because I don't love you,

"Yet" he says

"never" I say

I am falling falling and never to be found,

falling in a world so round,

so cold,

so lonely,

so very very lonely and cold like every one in it,

always breaking hearts,

I would be grateful if some one cared,

cared about life,love,

and maybe if I am lucky me.

 

© 2009 Jane Doe


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Jane Doe
idk just wanted to write

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This is wonderful expressionism at its best. Wonderful job

Posted 12 Years Ago


What prompt is it for? I like it it's cute, and the flow of words was fantastic. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more of your writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! One of my favorite poems! *saves to library*... Very passionate, and i love the rhymes! And Secret_Passion is right, sounds like a song! A profession song! You're a wonderful writer :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it
sounds like somthing that could be a song
=)
xxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 5, 2009

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