A single rose

A single rose

A Poem by Jane Doe

A single rose as a promise of love,

One half for me one half for you,

And that makes two ,

Two roses means two promises,

That means twice as much love,

Then three,four,five, and six,

And that leaves three couples by the Chexmix,

We give each couple a rose,

Then suprise suprise there is one inside,

A single rose as a promise of love,one half For me one half for you,

That makes two,

Twice the love and two promises. 

 

© 2009 Jane Doe


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Wow, Adorable and So very sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Just amazing! I love it. You have your own unique style of writing, and that's fantastic! Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool I luv the ChexMix part! I was laughing. That poem could go on and on! That was good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm. No criticism here. I liked it :) and the message was great and well though out.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats really good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVE IT! :) Favorite! Very well written :) wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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