Reality

When I am with him I am,
strong,
well collected.
and some what alive,

But when I am with you I am,
strong like superman,
togerther with out even thinking,
and alive very and I don't think about him at all,

you love,
you care,
your everything I need and want,
you are every thing but mine,
you are hers in reality.

 

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Wow, another wonderful write!

[Alz Alz]

wow! i love your writing :) some may be quite simple and short, but the meaning behind them holds an awesome power!

[Domo]

This poem brings back some old and cold memories. But I positively loved this poem, and think your writing is very influential. ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Secret_Passion]

ahhh i love
this is EXACTLY how i felt about this guy at scholl when i was with my ex
i liked my ex
i loved him
he had a gf

lol life is harsh but your poems good
xxx