Caged In

Caged In

A Poem by Jane Doe

Caged In

 

Held in captivity,

Tied up in ropes,

Mocked till Insanity hit me.

 

They do as an fun activity,

Crushing all my dreams and hopes,

Insane I go all from ...He.

 

Caged In,

no where to fly,

oh why do the times seem not to go by,

everyone watching the insane girl grow madder saying stuff like Hi.

 

Chained down to the lamp post,

I hate this place no where to hide,

And worst of all no Escape.

 

Held in place,

Tied by metal chains,

Mocked multiple times.

 

It's like when they're screaming and beating me in my face,

I'm lost somwhere trying to find that certain piece of hair from the horse's mane,

They're yelling gives me a headache they sound like a high pitched wind chimes.

 

Caged In,

no where to fly,

oh why do the times seem not to go by,

everyone watching the insane girl grow madder saying stuff like Hi.

 

Chained down to the lamp post,

I hate this place no where to hide,

And worst of all  ABSOLUTLY NO Escape.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
i dont think its that bad

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Good Job

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahaaa Wifey I feel claustrophobic now.

100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


AMAZING!!!!! LIKE THAT IS PERFECT!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not that bad? Shmabbigale, it's awesome. Like, super awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Makes you feel boxy when ya read it. I gotta be honest though, it was good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You present the raw emotions of frustration and helplessness that cabin fever or confinment has on a person really well here. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was very emotional and i loved it for that reaso so i'm giving you 100/100 great work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 25, 2010
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