Helpless

UGH!

Helpless,

These tears I cry,

Are from you never the less,

My tears come down as rain as  I fly so high.

 

Up Up UP and away,

No waves no sighs,

I'm gone for good  are the last words I will ever say,

No goodbyes.

 

To painful,

To dreadful,

Why would you be so cruel,

How could you use her like a freaking tool.

 

Up Up UP and away,

No waves no  sighs,

Im gone for good are the last words I will ever say,

No goodbyes.

 

No point,

For yelling out,

I am helpless as a broken joint,

You screamd I tried you ignored so I shall do the same just this time you cant pout.

Author's Note

forgetr you
IF YOU DONT WANT HELP FROM ME DONT FLIPPIN COMPLIAN!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

I can relate to the emotional heartache of this one. The frustration and pain of seeing someone you care about who doesn't want your help or anyone's help. A sensitive piece. You wrote it very well. Only mistake I can see is 'screamd' is missing another e. Apart from that there's nothing you should change with this one.