Helpless

Helpless

A Poem by Jane Doe
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UGH!

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Helpless,

These tears I cry,

Are from you never the less,

My tears come down as rain as  I fly so high.

 

Up Up UP and away,

No waves no sighs,

I'm gone for good  are the last words I will ever say,

No goodbyes.

 

To painful,

To dreadful,

Why would you be so cruel,

How could you use her like a freaking tool.

 

Up Up UP and away,

No waves no  sighs,

Im gone for good are the last words I will ever say,

No goodbyes.

 

No point,

For yelling out,

I am helpless as a broken joint,

You screamd I tried you ignored so I shall do the same just this time you cant pout.

© 2011 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
forgetr you
IF YOU DONT WANT HELP FROM ME DONT FLIPPIN COMPLIAN!!!!!!!!!!

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I can relate to the emotional heartache of this one. The frustration and pain of seeing someone you care about who doesn't want your help or anyone's help. A sensitive piece. You wrote it very well. Only mistake I can see is 'screamd' is missing another e. Apart from that there's nothing you should change with this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I can relate to the emotional heartache of this one. The frustration and pain of seeing someone you care about who doesn't want your help or anyone's help. A sensitive piece. You wrote it very well. Only mistake I can see is 'screamd' is missing another e. Apart from that there's nothing you should change with this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2011
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Jane Doe
Jane Doe

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I miss the way words would flow out on to a page and express my deepest concerns so I have returned. more..

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