Pasty White Vampire Woman

One stream of thoughts that just flowed out.... No Reasons, no format.. just a thought in the moment

 

 

 

It was something

different about her

She drew me in like

nature intended it

 

I felt weakened

by her presence

She was confident

It poured from her veins

Like water from a fountain

 

She made me feel assured

Secure in the knowledge

That she allowed me

To view her

knowing that

I was lusting

Over her flesh

 

I felt ashamed

When her eyes

Locked onto mine

She touched my soul

Stripping me of

Mental defenses

 

I felt nude

When she

Entered my mind

With only a glance

She took

Controll of me

 

She approached

And I watched

Gulping harder

And harder

Each time she

step forward

 

We stood

Face to face

Her scent

Touched me

Giving me feelings

Of warmth and care

Aroma of Roses

In the spring

Was her scent

 

I felt her hair

Brushing my shoulder

Her eyes

Hugged me tight

With all her might

 

I was frozen

Bound to the moment

Opening my eyes

I adored her beauty

 

Healthy and vibrant

Like Ivory

She was rare

A genuine treasure

 

I felt her lips

Caressing my neck

Sensualy my head

Leaned to the right

Her nose

Stroked my throat

As my eyes

Stayed focused

On her ivory breast

 

So perfect

Was the pain

It really didn’t hurt

I felt it sinking in

Burning my flesh

But I couldn’t resist

Her milky white skin

 

My vision faded

When I realized

She was feeding

On my blood

On my flesh

I knew

She was

supernatural

 

My heart pounded

My body tensed

But her presence

Gave me the strength

To bare her

sweet bitting kiss

 

She was my

Pasty White Vampire

And I was her prey

 

In that very moment

I was alive

even though

I was dead 

 

 

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Oooo.... This is a great vampire poem... The imagery that you used is amazing... I felt as if i were watching it happen...
"So perfect
Was the pain
It really didn't hurt
I felt it sinking in
Burning my flesh
But I couldn't resist
Her milky white skin" This is my favorite part of it....

Great Job!

[constancelovesdarkness]

it's really good:) good thing you didn't make her sparkle. it reminded me of either Queen of the Damned or Interview with the Vampire:)

[Cylis Derrens]

Love the view point from the vampire's victim. You can almost imagine this predatory female approaching. Her sweet smile as she draws you in, even to your doom.

[Legion]

The ebb and flow of this was perfect. Love the set up and the conclusion. Beautifully done. Kudos.

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I love, love, LOVE it and it is not just my fascination with vampires and hot women that makes me love it. A wonderful read and write my dear friend.