Lunar Dance

Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata and an oncoming thunderstorm inspired this one :)

How beautiful

Is the dear, sweet moon

How gentle is the sky!

Dance with me

Beneath the rays

'Til the darkness

Fades away

I'm fearless,

Swaying with the breeze,

I'm singing with the trees!

My love,

You look so beautiful

So come and dance with me.

 

 

 

Reviews

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What do ya mean you can't right poems about love! This was a beautiful piece that dripped romance and love all over a moonlit dance floor! *Smiles!*

Hmm...Then again, this might be a Pine tree singing to an Oak... *Wink!*

Love it!
*Hugs!* - Tara

[funeralmoon]

nice one, very whimsical.

[Chantel]

Beautiful!

[Dom]

This was awesome. I loved the way it flowed. It had great imagery too. Great job! :)

[AbsentElements]

Perfect ending, and amazing description throughout it all. Very nice piece.

[Aislinn Gryffin ((Ashes..]

i love this. it's fairly short, but it's brilliant. =]
Very beautiful.

[Jessica Lewis]

Absolutely love it. The tie with moonlight Sonata is perfect, probably my favorite Beethoven pieces!

[Jessica Mai]

This is so wonderfully written and flows beautifully. Like everyone says, you use awesome imagery and descriptions. I really really enjoyed this. I also love you name by the way (Super) Heroes Never Die! :D

[The Water Queen]

This is a beautiful poem. i love it great work

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful poem. Love the imagery and the way this was written.