never say never

never say never

A Poem by Jorge Ramos
"

dedicated to Katelyn Hibline my best friend. and to some one else that i wish i could tell.

"

Love is love

and that is that

there is a time

when time itself just D         s

                      r    i

                         p 

 

and that is when im with you.

 

pece is peace

but the only time when im at peace

is when my heart is F

                         a

                           l

                              l

                                i

                                  n

                                     g

for you.

 

so dont you see?

its as plain, as the sea.

that you and me

were always ment to be

 

for ever and always

i will love you from the ground up to the moon

i will love you before morning and past noon,

i will need you forever and ever

as long as never is never.

 

puppy love they say,

but i say

its more than that,

its a everlasting friend 

that will last more than for ever

more than today.

 

 

just never say never.

and be my friend forever and ever.

 

© 2008 Jorge Ramos


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I really liked it, it was soo cute. :)

You chose good words and it flowed nicely.
Good Job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i thought this piece flowed nicely. the graphic words were creative, and the repetition in the first couple of stanzas worked well. (like how the first and second stanza started off with similar lines) nice write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Jorge Ramos
Jorge Ramos

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