Death by Chocolate

Fun chocolate obsessed Senyru...

Subtleties of bliss

the relentless longing for

chocolate on tap

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

This one didn't really rock my world, but I enjoyed the last line....the title is so overused in our culture, I think I've seen four poems on this site alone with similar titles....but again, liked the last line. Senryrus seem to be trending, but they don't appeal to me much, unlike haiku's. Just my o.pinion

[Frieda P]

As you're entitled, yes, it's been overdone, you're right, but c'mon, chocolate on tap, I'd die in a vat of chocolate if I could pick a way to go.

[James William Dyer]

Lol

[Frieda P]

Well, that's my second choice anyway. ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I can think of a lot of pleasurable ways to be just before that 'way' kills you lol. If I had cancer, say, and the prognosis was terminal pain....I'd go the oxycodone route, with a weekend of xtc beforehand

[Frieda P]

Ugh I hated oxycodone, that stuff makes me weird, or weirder ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I love my little helpers:-)

[Frieda P]

ha yeah till you're an addict, go read what you inspired ;-)

[Rosa Carlyle-Mitchell]

OH MY GOD IM OBSESSED WITH CHOCOLATE. ON TAP.

[Frieda P]

haha good obsession! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Yummy!!!!!

[Frieda P]

:-)

[David Scott]

I think that is half the allure of chocolate... You just pop a little in whenever the urges strikes... Hmmm? I'll have to give this some thought. I may need to come up with a patent...
Making my way thru 85 Rr's...
Fun reading dear:-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks David, same here, loads of RR's, have a Happy New Year!!

[fiery-san]

Oh yes. Chocolate is like one of my guilty pleasures where I basically start and never stop until I finish it all up. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Me thinks thats how it's normally done ;-)

[Clayton Bardwell]

When I was a teenager I worked at Sears in the summer and stocked the chocolate booth. When a box broke open we had to "throw" it away. I broke a lot of boxes.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a fun job for a teen, almost as good as shoes, I worked in ShoeTown, that's where my addiction to shoes began.

[Relic]

I've been eating chocolate for the last three days so I had to read this. Now I want some more. I'll be doing a lot of flossing tomorrow. Great poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Relics, how much chocolate you figure it takes to fill a tub? ;-)

[Relic]

I could never figure out how many licks it took to reach the bottom of a tootsie pop so I wouldn't know.

[Frieda P]

That's a lot less intriguing me thinks! ;-P

[Relic]

Yeah, I guess it is. Well, I'll just say with a person in the tub it would take a certain amount of gallons and with two people in the tub it would take less gallons and after they were finished in the tub, there would be a even less gallons that have spilled on the floor from all the jostling that took place because of the enjoyment that both had. Whew, that was a pointless answer wasn't it?

[Frieda P]

hahahaha pretty much but it made me laugh, that's all that matters!

[Relic]

:))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Chocolate on tap, that might even be better then beer on tap.
I could eat chocolate till I get sick off it. I always enjoy seeing your fun and playful side.

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Dale, it does feel good to write something light like this. ;-)

[asdarkeyesclose]

i'm more of a cream cake person than a chocolate person given the choice, or a lime cheese cake person like today! my husband has taken to cooking cakes every other day- that is his thing at the moment but my tummy can't tke much more so I bought hm a casserole dish for Christmas to try and get him cooking savory things instead. chocolate is so decadent, you have to give in to it sometimes...

[PP]

Death By Chocolate IS my favorite dessert, my mouth is watering now Frieda...awwww what have you done?!?!?!? haha

Love this one:)