Death by Chocolate

Fun chocolate obsessed Senyru...

Subtleties of bliss

the relentless longing for

chocolate on tap

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

This one didn't really rock my world, but I enjoyed the last line....the title is so overused in our culture, I think I've seen four poems on this site alone with similar titles....but again, liked the last line. Senryrus seem to be trending, but they don't appeal to me much, unlike haiku's. Just my o.pinion

[Frieda P]

As you're entitled, yes, it's been overdone, you're right, but c'mon, chocolate on tap, I'd die in a vat of chocolate if I could pick a way to go.

[James William Dyer]

Lol

[Frieda P]

Well, that's my second choice anyway. ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I can think of a lot of pleasurable ways to be just before that 'way' kills you lol. If I had cancer, say, and the prognosis was terminal pain....I'd go the oxycodone route, with a weekend of xtc beforehand

[Frieda P]

Ugh I hated oxycodone, that stuff makes me weird, or weirder ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I love my little helpers:-)

[Frieda P]

ha yeah till you're an addict, go read what you inspired ;-)

[s y e]

Noodle loves chocolate and this little write was greeeeeeaaaat

[Frieda P]

You know they have recipe's for chocolate noodles, Noodles! ;-)

[s y e]

Hahahahaha! Yuckyyyyy! Chocolate noodles? Easier, Frieda, sounds disgusting love!

[s y e]

Ewwwwie not easier

[Frieda P]

It's not really, it's eaten as a dessert, Dark Chocolate Linguine with Chocolate Sauce...it's just dough, like donuts, you eat donuts, right?!
;-)

[s y e]

I lurveeee donuts ;-) Ah, I see. Ok its not as yucky as it sounds haha

[kublakhan27]

I don't know the exact terminology, but apparently chocolate appeals to the same areas of the brain as sex...probably one of the most "duh" factoids one will ever come across ;)

[Frieda P]

Exactly! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

;D

[quinfinn]

Cadburys dark or Hersheys special dark...otherwise....Pah! a scintillating little write!

[Frieda P]

There's the cutest little shop by me that sells all 'natural' foods. I don't usually spend extra for organic as I don't trust half of them are, but they have this great 'raw' chocolate they buy from a little old ma & pa place in PA it's truly as they call 'to die for'. Cherries and Chili's will put you over the moon if you like spicy!

[quinfinn]

we have a little store in town called "the chocolate fetish"...you would go bonkers in this place!

[Frieda P]

Oh what a fun name! :)

[quinfinn]

the chocolates are amazing!!! though expensive....

[Frieda P]

Yeah, this place too, but oh what a treat!

[KAOlmsted]

Huh. I never got the sweet tooth. Cannot stand milk chocolate, but every now and again I'll go for a small square of dark. Now...if you called for Pringles on tap...I'd be all over that s**t! :-D F**k it. Now I want some chips. God damn you, Frieda! :-p

The Senryu? Top notch.

[Frieda P]

Me either actually kimmer, unless it's 'dark' chocolate which I love but it would have thrown off my count. I like real food, but this seemed like a more addictive treat. Meatballs on tap is so not engaging. ;-) Thanks!

[InsanityWriter]

Whenever I have major chocolate cravings... There's almost always none in the house. -_- Great poem! Now I'm in the mood for some. ;)

[Frieda P]

You can't be a true choco addict then Insanity, one would never let that happen! Thanks!

[Keith]

mmmmmmmm Chocolate

Thanks for tripping off a craving in me. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha sorry Wes, that happens with chocolate....thanks. ;-)

[John Stussy]

Chocolate is yum. All I have to say. :P That and good little piece here.

[Frieda P]

Thought you'd like this one Booboo, had to write something light after the last one. ;-)

[John Stussy]

Haha, I did indeed. :P