Float My Boat

Float My Boat

A Poem by Frieda P
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tongue in cheek, sort of

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Are 'facts' really poetry?
I get it, if you obey all the rules
you'll miss out on all the fun
but seriously, 'I've eyes of brown
My dog's name is Spot, I love frootloops'
doesn't blow my skirt up or float my boat

© 2012 Frieda P


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I hear you Frieda. While I agree that it may not be what you or I consider poetry, some people seem enamored of it, perhaps so they can let others know who they are, and feel understood? I thought that was what the *about me* page was for, but seems not. I just choose to not read it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Even 'bad' poetry comes from the heart, I know I've written a few pieces myself! That at least I ca.. read more
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

we must all write stinkers from time to time Freida, it allows the other poems to smell so much bett.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I hate it when you make sense :-P



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Hey you I cannot keep up with such prolific output! as always a well penned and interesting write. this in a light hearted vein.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

This is the stuff 3 Mind Erasers are made of! Good thing I'm not an angry drunk lol
We must let ourselves go sometimes to really enjoy doing what we love. Rules are to be broken :) I compliment you on your varied & thought -provoking poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

11 Years Ago

Actually I did'nt understand a word of what the f**k it was! LMFAO!
hahaha!!! I hope you do n.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LMAO! You're too precious, how could I ever unfriend you!? Love you too kiddo...should I explain th.. read more
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

Yes. I would love to know?
I am thinking maybe it's a jeans day and just a ride in the park on dry land today. LoL
Fine point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Now even that's more poetic! hahaha
This is good. You have a very lovely way of explaining something.
Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

11 Years Ago

So true! So true hahaha :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Epic Fail, no one blocked me! ;-)
s y e

11 Years Ago

Ugh! Bummer man! Noodles love you too mooch to block ya! :-)
I hear you Frieda. While I agree that it may not be what you or I consider poetry, some people seem enamored of it, perhaps so they can let others know who they are, and feel understood? I thought that was what the *about me* page was for, but seems not. I just choose to not read it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Even 'bad' poetry comes from the heart, I know I've written a few pieces myself! That at least I ca.. read more
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

we must all write stinkers from time to time Freida, it allows the other poems to smell so much bett.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I hate it when you make sense :-P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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