Chance Bet

Chance Bet

A Poem by Frieda P

Pretend I'm lovely
pretend you don't see
the Pandora's box in me
be forewarned my friend
you fathom a glance
or attempt a peek
your soul will shudder
your eyes will burn
your mind will cease to be
convoluted pandemonium 
will wreck your speech
you take a big chance
when you place your bet on me

© 2012 Frieda P


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I disagree with you my friend!! When one takes time to look "inside" and "past" the outer facade the view settles on a very loving and charming one who has had more than enough of the unpleasant and unbearable side of life. It is said the diamond shines brighter when it is subjected to more cutting and polishing. Why some diamonds have to be put back into the tumbler again and again seems to be unfair, and at times it is just that....so dang unfair, but it is what we call "Life" in all its ugliness with the beauty. So guess what???? I am betting on you!!!! In my book.......You sparkle!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Are you trying to make me cry Shelia?! That brought a tear to my eye, you are SPECIAL, you always h.. read more
Sheila Kline

11 Years Ago

Not trying to make you cry my friend....just give you reason to realize how special you are!!! Hugs.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I love you too Lady Love! *squishys* ;-)



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Wow! Thanks for telling me! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

It's too late for you pal! ;-)
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

LOL! :)
He has been warned.............love it Frieda :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Neva ;-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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