I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by Frieda P
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Are there jellytots in Heaven?

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Do the stars not have a sense of humor
does the moon not hauntingly laugh at us
do rainbows add colors when we're asleep
do butterfly kisses leave an imprint on our soul
do flowers weep when they aren't picked
do flutterby's believe their own chaos theory
do balloons know they're floating messengers
does a baby's coo mean we're peculiar
does rain fall when we're not looking
does the wind wrap around the sky with hugs
do men actually believe it was Eve's fault
do the clouds mind when we fly through them
does a skyscraper loathe it's very existence
do oceans have a thousand secrets 
do mountains never tell a lie
do hearts actually break apart and bleed in sorrow
do children ever lose their sense of wonder,
                    must years always burn out our hunger

How high can angels actually fly?                                                   

I wonder...                                                            Butterfly Fly Away Animated                                                                

© 2013 Frieda P


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How high can angels actually fly?

I wonder...
so beautiful.. great write.
I loved each line was like a dose of perfect imagery and emotion

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Lol Kee, I was wondering why is he asking me that, you went back quite a ways for this one...depends.. read more
A wonderful wonder Frieda.. Imagery taken to another level.. Keep up the gud work babes..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Kajl, working on it, don't we always? ;-)
A whimsical piece I must say... it make feel all imaginative for some reason. ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I wonder why? ;-) Thanks!
yes, children, do. but nothing lost cannot be found, and starved years feel no pain. Feed it, and it will grow. Curiousity can come back to bless us, and angels fly low to free us. a wonderful write, milady. Love your wondering mind :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Why thank you for that lovely review, much appreciated. :-)
Lina Grey

7 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
No one knows how high they can fly i ask myself that question... This poem surely does make you wonder

Great Job as always Frieda

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thank you as always Kelsey :-)
Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

My greatest pleasure! :)
I have to admit I absolutely love this poem. It made me happy in my heart and put a smile on my face.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ahmad, I kind of like this myself! :-)
100/100% awesome!!!!i loved this poem very much:)but theres one person i knew behind all of this,,,,,its HIM!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woooo that's really sweet of you khicks, muchly appreciated! :-)
eloquently gorgeous write in both imagery, and flow. this is ah-mazing, Frieda :) -- thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Awh thanks Barrie, muchly appreciated! :-)
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

you welcome Frieda, as always this was a pleasure to read :)
do rainbows add colors when we're asleep
do flowers weep when they aren't picked

great questions
great write!



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

if not, they will now :-)
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

hahah maybe...
Sirius King

7 Years Ago

:-))
The mysteries of life and how they make us wonder. Very thought provoking. Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Carolann, much appreciated.
Carolann Dowsett

7 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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