What Do You See?

Butterflies take flight

 to the sun

to see the beauty

 of its rise and fall

it's metamorphosis

 a mystical tale

as the moon spins

 out of control

toppling crashing

 waves to rush 

azure seas 

glint shores of magic

pink flamingos

 on a blue lagoon

magnificent

 blue whales leap

to steal a glimpse

 of delightful

posies dabbling

 in watercolors

peacocks try

 to steal the show

the giraffe sticks

 his neck out

to see the glory

 of a dragonfly

who lands on the

 fierce tigress

protecting her

 fuzzball cubs

koalas hug and kiss

 fervently

in hopes of creating

 a wee joey

Paint a picture,

 what do you see

the spectacular

 beauty of nature

gloriously bountiful

for all to share 

Reviews

[David Scott]

Well... Hmmm
I would have to write a poem to reply dear.
I do see a poet dreaming a living dream. I see a poet who is part of this very landscape and no less Devine than the beauty that surrounds her.
Stay in this happy garden a spell my dear. It isy wish for you this Sabbath morn.
;-)

[Frieda P]

I'm waiting on that poetic reply ;-)

[Frieda P]

Still waiting.........................

[David Scott]

The pressure! The pressure! How can I write under these condition? Ha

[Frieda P]

You'll figure it out, I'm sure-you always do. ;-)

[fiery-san]

Lovely. I really like the playful imagery you've depicted. I lightened up my mood. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Nice to know. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Very beautiful :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tarry, if that mood could just stick around a lot longer! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

I know what you mean

[Frieda P]

;-)

[LA Lorena]

I'm sorry I was away and missed this happy and uplifting weekend of poetry from your positive pen!

[Frieda P]

ha probably never happen again either! ;-)
grazie!

[khalid]

i love nature. you add to the beauty of nature by writing about it in this beautiful way..i loved the images you have painted. i loved the words picking..i loved it all...you asked what i see, i see beauty when i read this..

[Frieda P]

What a lovely review khalid, thank you so much.

[khalid]

lovely review for a lovely poem..

[Frieda P]

:-)

[Clockwork]

Yes, nature is quit beautiful indeed and you did a good job of showing that. I especially liked detail about the dragonfly landing on the nose of the tigress. For some reason, I thought this piece was kinda trippy too. I thought of many colors while reading it.

[Frieda P]

Maybe we were smoking the same s**t lol ;-)

[Clockwork]

Haha maybe

[Frieda P]

:D

[kublakhan27]

So much blue...I like blue haha ;P Otherwise I'm speechless...more nice work :)

[Frieda P]

You got a problem with blue? haha

[kublakhan27]

None whatsoever...there can never be enough blue :)

[Frieda P]

I had to check, I hadn't even noticed!

[kublakhan27]

lol ;P

[That_Girl]

This is your perfect world? It's nice. :) Good poem, mama F.

[Frieda P]

I found that picture with the butterflies and had to write a poem about it, this was the result. My perfect world would have tequila trees too.
Thanks baby girl. ;-)

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely write. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittles :-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Lovely takes you into the world of nature, a thoroughly enjoyable journey.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for taking that journey with me. :-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)