Dip Me Senyru

Dip Me Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P

*Secret Desire*

dance me to the end of love

then you can dip me


                                                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                 

© 2013 Frieda P


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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha promises, promises....I said to the 'end' of love, not to the bed Baby! ;-)
in sauce? ;)

Seriously...
Not a secret desire, this should be a pre-condition, the rule! :@

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL that didn't fit into the format! ;-P
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

Lol!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

;-P
Short,sweet and simple.... also romantic...nice one! But coming from you I knew it would be good! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oooo thank you kind sir, that means a lot! ;-)
Christopher Booyakasha

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :-)
biscotti?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Two dunks please!
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

oh, you like the little mini ones?
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha NOooooooooooooo
Hmmm been a long time since I've been dipped :) Whilst dancing that is :-P Amazing as usual Frieda :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL! ;-)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

haha :)
Perfect. Said it all ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I thought that wrapped it up quite nicely myself ;-P
s y e

11 Years Ago

Yip. All is said and done ;-)
Indeed...
Shall we dance. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

shut up and kiss me first lol ;-)
You dip, I dip, we dip...lol. Nice...=) This was really beautiful...-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I love how you conjugated this read.. ;-)
And that, is all that needs said :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Love that response ;-)
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

:-)
In chocolate? Now this is the way to start the morning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha chocolate would be grand!

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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