Dip Me Senyru

Dip Me Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P

*Secret Desire*

dance me to the end of love

then you can dip me


                                                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                 

© 2013 Frieda P


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I agree sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the read.
Silent Kim aka mizmetaphysicallady

11 Years Ago

YW
sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Danke.
truth doesn't need long sentences, I see


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Nope, short and to the point, long answers would surely convolute the truth...thanks for reading Mar.. read more
Marri

11 Years Ago

reading your works is always invigorating and inspiring, of course I read more than I review as I d.. read more
love senryu you made a Japanese out of me well done Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL! ;-)
In chocolate I hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Oh yes love dark chocolate.
Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

why have it if its not dark XD
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

beats me.....
Short and sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Love this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kelsey ;-)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

You are quite welcome! Always count on me for a review!
I just woke up so my mind is not sufficiently warmed up to produce a Cohen reference...the point is well taken though ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

This waltz, this waltz, this waltz, this waltz ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

*swooning* ;-D
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;D
i am gonna behave like a gentleman, just to prove that i can. very sweet senryu. had me thinking of romantic times from my past with loved ones. nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha kidding, i do like my dip hot though ;-P
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

you have inspired me. gonna go to youtube and watch bruce do his version of "jersey girl"
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh geez, you just blew my skirt up sir! You won't be sorry. ;-)
Cuz down the shore everythi.. read more
Brought back some good memories with this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're always so sweet Michael, thank you.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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