Kids, Shaking My Head  Senryu

Kids, Shaking My Head Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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If you have kids, you get it, you get the absolute best of them and sometimes the worst.

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Just wanted to say,

kids can be a bitter pill...

the best & the worst


© 2013 Frieda P


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Children should come fully equipped for parental totalitarianism. On "Star Trek: Next Generation", Data, a droid, has an on/off switch. A handy parenting tool. Evolution typically shows no sensitivity to a simple mutation, morphing fast enough to be of use by us. In my house, if the kids earn compliments, that is because they are good kids. If they fall under the anvil of the principle for flagrant disobedience of Serious Rules, then that is my fault. A bitter pill indeed. Cleverly noted thought provoking piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

ha pretty funny, this is not Star Trek though, real life doesn't serve us up with the opportunity to.. read more
exotic flotsam

8 Years Ago

You have posted veteran wisdom. I've been an at home dad for 17 years. You write the truth, my mothe.. read more



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And some don't get any better when they get older... taking the good with the bad... sounds like something I have heard of before called life :)

That cartoon is funny.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Don't bring b***s into my kid friendly thread Dale...pfft ;-)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Years Ago

Okie dokie, how about one good turn deserves another then.

I have been a bad boy, so sp.. read more
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

That's better spank you very much ;-)
I am too young for kids yet I am sure my twin and I and my older sister have made my mom feel like this ha Great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

I'd bet my life on that Kelsey.... ;-P
Lover Of Words

8 Years Ago

OKay maybe not me but my sisters did im too sweet LOL
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

PFFFT!!
Oh yes. I absolutely get it ;-) And that cartoon made seltzer nearly come out my nose...you're just lucky there wasn't any precious vodka in it...wasting vodka is punishable by death...Love this Senryu. (I also love that, no matter how many f*****g times I have told you you are misspelling it, you still misspell it) xD (Yeah, I'm done editing...can you tell?)

Posted 8 Years Ago


KAOlmsted

8 Years Ago

Huh...you know, I really don't know, Frieda. It would make an interesting study.

Kee.... read more
KeeD

8 Years Ago

LOL It means it's so hot it creates melted cheese in my pants.
Ditto, off to bed love you bot.. read more
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

I guess I'll just talk to myself, which isn't that unusual...so, yeah.

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Added on February 5, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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