Wrong Sex Senryu
A Poem by
Frieda P
When you say my name
the sun rises in my loins
then you called me 'jack '
© 2013 Frieda P
Featured Review
Uh oh! That's a one way street to being a one night stand, right there. In fact, I'd leave right then and there. Well given the fact that said man was still 'entertaining' (have to keep it PG for the young-uns) a woman, he's probably just bisexual. Keep your head up, Frieda, you've still got a chance! Perhaps there's a marriage and a shoe-shopping partner...? Haha!
xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
lol Maddie, are you old enough to read this? ;-) x
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Maybe he was talking bout another kind of jack... just saying.
You crack me up young lady.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Maybe he was talking bout another kind of jack... just saying.
You crack me up young lady.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Perhaps Dale, I don't really care about him anymore, as long as you keep calling me 'young' ;-P
11 Years Ago
You got it... for me you will be in the words of Rod Stewart "forever young"
I know some gals that go by Jack . . . doesn't have to be only a boy's name
Posted 11 Years Ago
I know some gals that go by Jack . . . doesn't have to be only a boy's name
11 Years Ago
at least you weren't called something worse
11 Years Ago
Let your hair down and get over it ;)
11 Years Ago
i used to date a Jackie....called her "jack" and she loved it
11 Years Ago
Some people need to get a sense of humor...I hear they've got some at Amazon or try ebay...
A girl can't be called "Jack"? Or am I missing something?
Posted 11 Years Ago
A girl can't be called "Jack"? Or am I missing something?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
What does that matter if Jack isn't MY name Marie?
Never heard that. Never used it. (I don't think I ever will.)
I had more to say, but don't know if I should.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Never heard that. Never used it. (I don't think I ever will.)
I had more to say, but don't know if I should.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I wish you had since I have no clue what you mean.
11 Years Ago
I saved my thoughts. Probably shouldn't have though. Sooooo......
Perhaps a very honest.. read more I saved my thoughts. Probably shouldn't have though. Sooooo......
Perhaps a very honest mistake while caught up in the heat of passion? You simply took his breath away when things got "out of hand?" Just a thought.
Nice! I struggle getting a point across without filling a damn page and here you are in three lines nailing it. Sweet....
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice! I struggle getting a point across without filling a damn page and here you are in three lines nailing it. Sweet....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Ha, sometimes the fewer words the better, thanks.
Two words: Holy... WOW!
That made me laugh! I swear that would be awkward as fook! Omg, awkward situation there hun...
Posted 11 Years Ago
Two words: Holy... WOW!
That made me laugh! I swear that would be awkward as fook! Omg, awkward situation there hun...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Glad you enjoyed it noodles.
11 Years Ago
Enjoyed it? It was amazeballs! Lol made me laugh ALOT
11 Years Ago
Good to know some people around here still have a sense of humor. ;-P
11 Years Ago
Hahaha. Fookin make me laugh ;-D
11 Years Ago
That's what i get paid for. ;-P
Well at least it is obvious he has good taste. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Well at least it is obvious he has good taste. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Lol...you would say that!
name loins "jack"
a vivid imagination......................
Posted 11 Years Ago
name loins "jack"
a vivid imagination......................
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
ha mostly just sick in the head! thanks ;-)
11 Years Ago
well we are obsessed with this tendency........the writers! hahahah
11 Years Ago
So true, so true....ha
11 Years Ago
and actually it acts like a cessation!
LOL
This is hilarious!...
I hate when that happens! (he he) :D
Nicely done Frieda! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
LOL
This is hilarious!...
I hate when that happens! (he he) :D
Nicely done Frieda! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Yep could put a damper on the evening! ;-)
Thanks Robbie
this is nature orientated -just sayin'*)
quite cute,really funny,love these lines*)
you go chude (chick and dude) new words we are creating going to run with the younger set soon thank you for sharing and yes it is a nice Sunday afternoon humor piece
Posted 11 Years Ago
this is nature orientated -just sayin'*)
quite cute,really funny,love these lines*)
you go chude (chick and dude) new words we are creating going to run with the younger set soon thank you for sharing and yes it is a nice Sunday afternoon humor piece
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Now that's an entirely different write that wouldn't fit into the confines of a Senryu..hey, at leas.. read more Now that's an entirely different write that wouldn't fit into the confines of a Senryu..hey, at least i didn't charge you for it, just saying... ;-P
11 Years Ago
yeah true...well then I like it even better free stuff is always the best!
11 Years Ago
Ha I still owe you....
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Added on February 24, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll..
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