Wrong Sex Senryu

Wrong Sex Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P

When you say my name

        the sun rises in my loins

then you called me 'jack

© 2013 Frieda P


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Uh oh! That's a one way street to being a one night stand, right there. In fact, I'd leave right then and there. Well given the fact that said man was still 'entertaining' (have to keep it PG for the young-uns) a woman, he's probably just bisexual. Keep your head up, Frieda, you've still got a chance! Perhaps there's a marriage and a shoe-shopping partner...? Haha!

xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

lol Maddie, are you old enough to read this? ;-) x



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Maybe he was talking bout another kind of jack... just saying.
You crack me up young lady.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Perhaps Dale, I don't really care about him anymore, as long as you keep calling me 'young' ;-P
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

You got it... for me you will be in the words of Rod Stewart "forever young"
I know some gals that go by Jack . . . doesn't have to be only a boy's name

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kaylor Mason

11 Years Ago

Let your hair down and get over it ;)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i used to date a Jackie....called her "jack" and she loved it
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Some people need to get a sense of humor...I hear they've got some at Amazon or try ebay...
A girl can't be called "Jack"? Or am I missing something?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What does that matter if Jack isn't MY name Marie?
Never heard that. Never used it. (I don't think I ever will.)
I had more to say, but don't know if I should.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I wish you had since I have no clue what you mean.
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

I saved my thoughts. Probably shouldn't have though. Sooooo......

Perhaps a very honest.. read more
Nice! I struggle getting a point across without filling a damn page and here you are in three lines nailing it. Sweet....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, sometimes the fewer words the better, thanks.
Two words: Holy... WOW!

That made me laugh! I swear that would be awkward as fook! Omg, awkward situation there hun...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

11 Years Ago

Hahaha. Fookin make me laugh ;-D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's what i get paid for. ;-P
s y e

11 Years Ago

Haha!
Well at least it is obvious he has good taste. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Lol...you would say that!
name loins "jack"
a vivid imagination......................


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

11 Years Ago

well we are obsessed with this tendency........the writers! hahahah
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So true, so true....ha
junaid altaf

11 Years Ago

and actually it acts like a cessation!
LOL
This is hilarious!...
I hate when that happens! (he he) :D

Nicely done Frieda! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yep could put a damper on the evening! ;-)

Thanks Robbie
this is nature orientated -just sayin'*)
quite cute,really funny,love these lines*)
you go chude (chick and dude) new words we are creating going to run with the younger set soon thank you for sharing and yes it is a nice Sunday afternoon humor piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Now that's an entirely different write that wouldn't fit into the confines of a Senryu..hey, at leas.. read more
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

yeah true...well then I like it even better free stuff is always the best!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I still owe you....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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