Wrong Sex Senryu

When you say my name

        the sun rises in my loins

then you called me 'jack' 

Reviews

[A. V. Madison]

Uh oh! That's a one way street to being a one night stand, right there. In fact, I'd leave right then and there. Well given the fact that said man was still 'entertaining' (have to keep it PG for the young-uns) a woman, he's probably just bisexual. Keep your head up, Frieda, you've still got a chance! Perhaps there's a marriage and a shoe-shopping partner...? Haha!

xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors

[Frieda P]

lol Maddie, are you old enough to read this? ;-) x

[rubie]

"the sun rises in my loins".

wow. i love that line.....

nice going, dude....

[Frieda P]

ha thanks rubie, I should have saved that for a better read eh?

[quinfinn]

guys who call each other "b***h".. chicks who call each other "dude"...what's up with that? i mean, i never even made the mistake of calling my partner by another woman's name...much less, saying a man's name to her....i hope it was a simple, harmless fook up.

[Frieda P]

guys call each other b***h, really?

[quinfinn]

oh yes, but it is usually ensued by a fight....(them's fightin' words, as we say in the south)

[Frieda P]

I thought you relished that name for us gals only, who knew?

[quinfinn]

two things i never call a woman....b***h and c**t...they are irreversible

[Frieda P]

'b***h' seems to be used as a term of endearment lately, don't even get me started on that other one....

[quinfinn]

don't worry, i am fully aware of the repercussions of "the wrath of pickles"

[Frieda P]

:-D only have love for you hun, you're safe

[quinfinn]

whew!

[Lover Of Words]

Haha so good

[Frieda P]

Just a little humor for a Sunday afternoon. ;-D

[Lover Of Words]

Can always count on you for the humor :D

[Frieda P]

Ha it's that or you get another raging one...thought I'd give you a break ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

no break needed

[Frieda P]

what...wait, maybe that was me :-P

[Lover Of Words]

LOL i would say it was :D