Wrong Sex Senryu

When you say my name

        the sun rises in my loins

then you called me 'jack' 

Reviews

[A. V. Madison]

Uh oh! That's a one way street to being a one night stand, right there. In fact, I'd leave right then and there. Well given the fact that said man was still 'entertaining' (have to keep it PG for the young-uns) a woman, he's probably just bisexual. Keep your head up, Frieda, you've still got a chance! Perhaps there's a marriage and a shoe-shopping partner...? Haha!

xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors

[Frieda P]

lol Maddie, are you old enough to read this? ;-) x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Maybe he was talking bout another kind of jack... just saying.
You crack me up young lady.

[Frieda P]

Perhaps Dale, I don't really care about him anymore, as long as you keep calling me 'young' ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got it... for me you will be in the words of Rod Stewart "forever young"

[Kaylor Mason]

I know some gals that go by Jack . . . doesn't have to be only a boy's name

[Kaylor Mason]

at least you weren't called something worse

[Kaylor Mason]

Let your hair down and get over it ;)

[quinfinn]

i used to date a Jackie....called her "jack" and she loved it

[Frieda P]

Some people need to get a sense of humor...I hear they've got some at Amazon or try ebay...

[Marie]

A girl can't be called "Jack"? Or am I missing something?

[Frieda P]

What does that matter if Jack isn't MY name Marie?

[Michael G.]

Never heard that. Never used it. (I don't think I ever will.)
I had more to say, but don't know if I should.

[Frieda P]

I wish you had since I have no clue what you mean.

[Michael G.]

I saved my thoughts. Probably shouldn't have though. Sooooo......

Perhaps a very honest mistake while caught up in the heat of passion? You simply took his breath away when things got "out of hand?" Just a thought.

[The Rhino]

Nice! I struggle getting a point across without filling a damn page and here you are in three lines nailing it. Sweet....

[Frieda P]

Ha, sometimes the fewer words the better, thanks.

[s y e]

Two words: Holy... WOW!

That made me laugh! I swear that would be awkward as fook! Omg, awkward situation there hun...

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed it noodles.

[s y e]

Enjoyed it? It was amazeballs! Lol made me laugh ALOT

[Frieda P]

Good to know some people around here still have a sense of humor. ;-P

[s y e]

LMAOROFL!

[Frieda P]

:-D

[s y e]

Hahaha. Fookin make me laugh ;-D

[Frieda P]

That's what i get paid for. ;-P

[s y e]

Haha!

[Jack...]

Well at least it is obvious he has good taste. :)

[Frieda P]

Lol...you would say that!

[junaid altaf]

name loins "jack"
a vivid imagination......................

[Frieda P]

ha mostly just sick in the head! thanks ;-)

[junaid altaf]

well we are obsessed with this tendency........the writers! hahahah

[Frieda P]

So true, so true....ha

[junaid altaf]

and actually it acts like a cessation!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL
This is hilarious!...
I hate when that happens! (he he) :D

Nicely done Frieda! :)

[Frieda P]

Yep could put a damper on the evening! ;-)

Thanks Robbie

[Holly Mason]

this is nature orientated -just sayin'*)
quite cute,really funny,love these lines*)
you go chude (chick and dude) new words we are creating going to run with the younger set soon thank you for sharing and yes it is a nice Sunday afternoon humor piece

[Frieda P]

Now that's an entirely different write that wouldn't fit into the confines of a Senryu..hey, at least i didn't charge you for it, just saying... ;-P

[Holly Mason]

yeah true...well then I like it even better free stuff is always the best!

[Frieda P]

Ha I still owe you....