I Write therefore I Am

I write poetry

    because no one hears

                the spoken word

    ~ink it~ 

               magically,

   becomes more arresting

             than the utterance of voice

like an enchanting song

             it brings a melody to mind

   undulating waves in and about

           the strings of heart

lengths of strands,

 unadulterated thoughts

            to bestow

A divine. sweet find .

         like the mystical pearls of an oyster

           twisted gently to

overflow & materialize

          set the mood so elevated

take it the deepest sea depths

or the sky if you dare,

commanding in its flight...

        Just fly with it instinctively

        feel the winds soar as you heighten,

                   & release yourself so freely

Reviews

[Alexander B. Kerri]

Yet literature may not always end up as something positive, perhaps it might be something of the abrogating mental aroma. For many authors such as myself go mad over the smallest bits of harmful realization throughout descending into greater literature.

[Frieda P]

It's all good, as long as it makes you 'feel' something in estimation...thanks Alexander.

[Claire Twinn]

Your lovely poem does all it says so beautifully. It's a powerful thing to have such mastery of words.

[Frieda P]

Oh what a great review Claire, I was talking more of the 'feel' of poetry, but I'll take it! :-)

[Renée]

love the line " like the mystical pearls of an oyster" that they are when a poet/poetess words touches the reader ..

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks Renee, so glad you liked it.

[kublakhan27]

I can't say much in response to this one, it's all in the poem :) And I don't need to tell you I sympathize with it ;P

[Frieda P]

Tea & sympathy? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Tea (and sympathy) with Miss R? How can I refuse ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha sounds like the thing to do on a Sunday afternoon ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Indeed, it will clear my mind for the customary three or four pucks to the head I will take tonight ;)

[Frieda P]

Ouchie....that's gonna take a lot I fear! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

What can I say, I sign up for that ;P

[Frieda P]

ha you like it rough eh? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I like balance ;)

[Frieda P]

that's what she said...

[kublakhan27]

That's what "she" said huh? Sounds like me and "her" would get along good ;P

[Frieda P]

Lol I thought they did!! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

;)

[Gomer LePoet]

You certainly are Ms. Frieda. A poem of old charm, class and relevance. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Gomer, glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[Emerald Seas]

Wonderfully written, Frieda! Writing takes us everywhere, if we let it. Reading allows others to join us on the journey, or it takes them in a similar but different path due to their differing experiences or mind set. An inspirational read.
now ... where is that pen? ;)

[Frieda P]

So true Sera, I've been on many a voyage here, it's all good but when it rings a bell in your soul, it's grand, thanks so much. ;-) Got pen?

[stephen dillon]

this is really outstanding i think you would enjoi reading my stuff check it out

[Frieda P]

I will definitely do so, thanks stephen.

[stephen dillon]

cool

[Pete Langley]

I envy you your spontaneity, Freida - especially because, unlike so many, you manage to produce unfettered art with very real music to it. I write poetry to actually clarify thoughts for myself, but my impression is that you already have that clarity before you start writing! I love this piece. P.

[Frieda P]

I write for clarity and sanity! Such a sweet review Pete, thanks so much.

[ms. barrie]

Frieda,

This is simply a gorgeous, uplifting poem! Wonderful choice of words as well as meter. Thanks for sharing! Take care -- xoxo :)

[Frieda P]

Always nice to see you Barrie, thanks so much for your great review, and I haven't forgotten about your story, I promise you! ;-) xo

[ms. barrie]

Thank you Frieda, you also :) - It's a great poem. Oh, no rush with the stories, should still be posted on here, anytime...have a great evening, Frieda :) xox

[s y e]

This is a great write hun, the flow of the poem is great. You're a talented poet. Nice job

[Frieda P]

Aren't we serious tonight, thanks Ms Noodles.

[s y e]

Ha, oh so serious : P

[James Hanna-Magill]

Dear Frieda P

Not so much 'Cogito ergo sum' - I think therefore I am; rather 'Scribo ergo sum' - I write therefore I am.

This is a beautifully crafted poem. I love the bravery of the deleted word; it's uncommon, unusual and stands out.

As for sentiment, perhaps we all as writers agree, but I above all - I write with greater clarity and meaning than I can ever get across in speech.

This may be brief as commentaries go or at least relative to many of mine. But the strength of feeling and candour remain the same.

The meaning of words, of your words will linger rather longer than when I place my rather meaningless final, signature sign off, James, on this page.

But then I don't think thoughts that provoke ever leave us. They have the habit of returning when we are in reflective mode. And I for one am pleased they do.

Thank you for sharing this charming piece.

With my kindest regards

James

[Frieda P]

I am definitely stealing 'Scribo ergo sum' for my profile...thanks for this insightful review. I certainly don't speak the way I write, and I think we take more liberties and put ourselves out there with the written word, no one there to smack us back in the face with our own words. Much appreciate your visit James, thank you kindly.