~I Take You in...

Follow me

              into this haven

       of serenity

feel my soul

           upon your lips

touch the breath

        of my fervor 

escape with me 

            to  surrender

       intoxicate my euphoria

             to release

       smother my exhilaration

            in exaltation

submit to the longing

          in my loins

       enter into my soft lightness

I take you in

             as a deep inhale

you splay the nape of

sweet gasping whispers 

               the world has moved

  anointed with nirvana's

                          

 sweet death

whilst entangled

                 in rapturous

                       pause

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I did that in the hot tub last night...amazing how I can still get my feet up that high with the help of bubbling water ;-) I kneed myself in the nose a couple of times, hurt like hell...and one of the jets left an imprint on my left butt cheek...all in all, not my favorite position...at least doggy style I can still drink my drink...

Oh...did you write a poem? Hm...yes...it's quite lovely...quite lovely indeed...

[quinfinn]

damnit kimmers! i just spewed beer all over my keyboard!!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

xD

[Frieda P]

Holy cats!! ha, this has got to down in history as a review on the WC..and it's Featured!! You're a nutter, love you to pieces, thanks!

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Always my pleasure, ma'am...

[Frieda P]

Ha they didn't kick you out of AL yet? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Morgan and I decided to skip it...he left before 7 this morning. I slept until 9:30 ;-)

[Frieda P]

Oh sweet, you're having a mother/daughter day, is she drinking too? ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

She may as well be, I bought her a Mountain Dew this morning...the child is insane on Mountain Dew. I should just skip the middle man and mainline sugar and caffeine straight into her veins xD

[Frieda P]

Hahaha my poor little kimmer, she has no chance, no chance at all! Lol

[Rogue]

Love the way this is worded. All the thoughts one has about another and finds it hard to verbally articulate. You have captured those thoughts wonderfully here in your writing. :)

[Frieda P]

So happy you enjoyed it Rogue, ha, I don't talk like in real life either ;-)

[quinfinn]

don't you believe it, Rogue

[Frieda P]

.....here comes trouble

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! What a beautiful way to breathe in one another... this is divine!
I love the artistic picture below your romantic piece.... truly mesmerizing!

[Frieda P]

Oh you know I love that word divine! Thanks so much soul sister xo

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Wow, this is really beautiful. Well done Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie, happy you liked this one... ;-)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

I sure did, thanks for sharing :)

[first second third]

this is beautiful! this makes me miss my boyfriend. this is very enticing! fabulose!

[Frieda P]

Sweet thought forsaken, thanks...

[Jack...]

damn this was beautiful, filled with desire and longing, that need for someone to hold and love. You somehow know many of us feel and bring us to the point of almost understand oursleves.

[Frieda P]

Ha, that made me smile, I wish it worked for me...thanks so much Jack.

[redflutterby]

You achieve what others fall far short of in this subject matter. Delicate sensual sweetness and achingly erotic.... pure unbridled longing. Love it!!!

[Frieda P]

Wooo, love this review! Thanks so much....!

[redflutterby]

You are welcome... :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done miss frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks mucly ms dreamer :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome!

[khalid]

how can i touch the keyboard in order to review since you made everything here such hot? lol..if something like that said to a man by his lady, he will have to be a dragon..

[Frieda P]

Lol release the kraken! Thanks for the lovely review khalid...

[khalid]

my pleasure..

[Michael G.]

Stunningly good.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Michael, so happy you liked it.

[Pete Langley]

OK, I give in. That`s a definite maybe, then, is it? I`ll check the Virgin flights. Oh, s**t, who`ll feed the cats?.....wait now, they`ve plenty of fat on`em...now if I can remember who I lent my posing pouch to.......Beautiful, Freida. P.

[Frieda P]

This made me smile, thanks so much Pete!