If It Walks like a pig...

This was actually a challenge to use the word of the day-'extraterritoriality'...

Extraterritoriality was your end goal

get away with murder and look the other way

forgotten about the debris left in your wake

crimson bloody rags strewn throughout this room

clean up with mops of logic & coherence were no match,

for the wrath of which you scavenged your hold

lurking in the somber halls of accountability

will be your soul one day...I only hope this clean up

comes before I'm dead

would be nice to see where you place the blame

corrupt genetics or decomposed compatibility

familial affinity for noxious fumes is unavoidable

trapped in the odorous decay of flammable malfeasance

if it walks like a pig & acts like a pig...

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

...then certainly it must be a pig, but I like Jack's answer more ;-)

Ugh...this left a film on me. I feel all grimy and gross. And that taste in my mouth...yuck, I just want to spit it out. Super powerful write. I'm gonna go hit the rain locker.

[Frieda P]

Ha you hate Rosie too.... ;-) Yeah it left a film on me too apparently....

[KAOlmsted]

I had to wash my hair three times ;-)

[Frieda P]

I'm sure you have the sweet scent of wildflowers now.... ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

...coconuts :-/

[Frieda P]

ha should have figured there'd be nuts in there someplace! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Well, you are what you eat ;-)

Wait...

[Frieda P]

That's odd, I haven't had frootloops at all ;-)

[quinfinn]

you are a frootloop

[Frieda P]

Lol, the peanut gallery is awake!!

[KAOlmsted]

I'm Cool Ranch Doritos...certifiably so ;-)

[Frieda P]

Haha, I won't even tell you that last night I had pork, but it was the tenderloin! Lol...! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Men eat a lot of bacon...just saying ;-)

[quinfinn]

where do you get this stuff? you are amazing! one of these days i wanna sit down with you and have you share what you're smoking with me, because i love the train of thought here. i wanna be like frieda when i learn to write poetry.....very nice!

[Frieda P]

Haha, wasn't smoking anything, at least not then anyway! Thanks for your overwhelming kindness always quin...x

[ba_mcfarlane]

channeled rage and passion and written so well....I like this!

[Frieda P]

So glad you did! Grazie...

[Pax]

a heavy depth in your words my friend ~ if it walks like a pig & acts like a pig ~ oh, how humans can be such as that, its a sad reality... truth hides in every corner of Extraterritoriality...wonderful work my friend...

[Frieda P]

Truth can hide, but it can't be altered Pax, thanks so much for your review.

[Pax]

i think you're right on that... for no matter how you bend the truth to your wishes... some glitches will appear to caught you off guard... and your most welcome!

[redflutterby]

..it is a pig. Awww sweetie the pain you have suffered cries out in this. I have a good friend who is a survivor... tears your soul. I hope that accountability happens. Much luv...

[Frieda P]

I doubt it, I'm on a survivor site, the amount of times it happens it practically nil...thanks, hope your friend is doing alright.

[Jack...]

Oh so this is how it works...the heavy duty stuff comes out at night...no more of this daytime fluff, the gritty dirty blood covered wordage hits the site after dark...I knew I was missing something. Friday Night Frieda...another creative (nice use of the word of the day, which I am not going to attempt to type) and amazing piece of writing. When did you say that book was coming out??? I will be first in line. (As long as it is not dark outside)

Oh wait...let me guess. If it walks like a pig & acts like a pig...hmm..umm...Rosie O'Donnell?

[Frieda P]

Lol I take it you don't like Rosie so much...thanks Jack!

[Jack...]

Ummmm-no