Violins & Lover's Sighs

Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

Violins and lover's sighs

your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire

it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony

won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango

you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition

an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat

You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro

I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin

And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense

the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 

soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans

came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two

[Frieda P]

Laughing, you know I'm going to go with Friijack! Thanks my lovely friend, jazzed you enjoyed it. x

[ANTO]

I knew it as soon as I typed that .....lol
X

[Frieda P]

Ha you know me too well. ;-) x

[Jack...]

I don't know, I'm kind of partial to Jackieda. It has a nice ring to it.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me block you Jack! ;-)

[ANTO]

I wonder how Brangelina sorted theirs out..? ;)

[Frieda P]

Big bucks I'd imagine! Lol

[Jack...]

Then I'd be known as Blockieda. Still sounds good.

[Frieda P]

More like Friiblock!!

[Jack...]

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.

[Frieda P]

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)

[ANTO]

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol

[Corset]

Really Frieda this is getting so embarrasing when you write about me like this in front of everyone! sheesh. Seriously, beautiful music dancing about in here, and the way you have captured that connection of souls is very lovely.

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks, this was actually a collaboration, and do I know you? ;)

[Corset]

no, you don't know me, but I followed you home from the movies, lol. jk..no wonder it's been so eaceful of late. heeheee, yeah it's Corset.

[Frieda P]

HA sick as ever...hey! Good to see you back you crazy kid you. ;)

[Corset]

I'm just hanging out here for the music you have playing in here :) Thanks Pickle :)

[Frieda P]

Ha it is grand isn't it? ;) Stay as long as you like, glass of vino?

[Corset]

would love one! (or ten)

[Frieda P]

Perhaps the bottle and a straw would do the job haha

[Corset]

even better

[Vikrantsingh]

I loved Violen its simply amazing instrument to peel off your pain
You narrated this wonderfully Frieda :)
Simply amazing :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Singh, but half the credit goes to Jack too... :-)

[Leslie Philibert]

fine use of couplets here, as ever, Frieda puts her work together excellently

[Frieda P]

Friijack as Antnee so aptly put it, thanks Leslie.

[Astro]

Great use of musical innuendo. This one resonates in the core more than in the mind but anything that makes the reader feel is solid in my eyes. Way to go guys.

[Frieda P]

Hey, I'm all for the core, best compliment ever, thanks Astro!

[Astro]

You're welcome Frieda.

[Troy Henson]

A wonderful collaboration between the two of you. Most certainly has ellements of you both. Once again nicely flowing piece that sang to me as I read this. Just wonderful.
Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Thanks for this great review Troy, so nice when you hear the poetry sing....

[Cassie]

ehhhhh!!!!! just wow!!! This is so beautiful, stunning, amazing, all the words you could use to explain a good thing.

[Frieda P]

Woooo Cassie, jazzed you enjoyed it!

[Pryde Foltz]

Great work guys. Lots of frolicking fun.

[Frieda P]

Grazie Pryde, it was a lot of fun doing this collaboration with Jack, glad you enjoyed it.

[Ken Simm.]

Well, I am gabberflasted. My gabber has never been so flasted. What a striking collaboration. I am at a loss to see who contributed what. And that is always the sign of a good collected effort. Well done both.

[Frieda P]

Love when we can flast your gabber! Thanks Ken. ;-)

[DIVYA]

Awesome, mindblowing, sensational - music played here Frieda and Jack. Your collaborations are so breathtaking always. They never cease to amaze and excite. Keep writing and giving us such wonders always.

[Frieda P]

So jazzed you liked our collaboration Divya, we had a blast.