Violins & Lover's Sighs

Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

Violins and lover's sighs

your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire

it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony

won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango

you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition

an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat

You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro

I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin

And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense

the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 

soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans

came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two

[Frieda P]

Laughing, you know I'm going to go with Friijack! Thanks my lovely friend, jazzed you enjoyed it. x

[ANTO]

I knew it as soon as I typed that .....lol
X

[Frieda P]

Ha you know me too well. ;-) x

[Jack...]

I don't know, I'm kind of partial to Jackieda. It has a nice ring to it.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me block you Jack! ;-)

[ANTO]

I wonder how Brangelina sorted theirs out..? ;)

[Frieda P]

Big bucks I'd imagine! Lol

[Jack...]

Then I'd be known as Blockieda. Still sounds good.

[Frieda P]

More like Friiblock!!

[Jack...]

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.

[Frieda P]

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)

[ANTO]

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol

[Kristin Lee]

I admit my mind was wandering a little as I read this only because I so desperately want to learn how to play the cello. I can play piano, guitar and violin, but it's the cello I want to play and always have :) And knowing my ticket could be punched at any time...well let's just say I'm not taking anything for granted any more. Beautiful poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you Kristin. I hope you learn how to play the cello, it seems like a fun instrument to play.

[Frieda P]

I love the cello too Krisitn, have you listened to 2 cellos, they're wonderful, and thanks.

[Kristin Lee]

I have. They've always captivated me :)

[Frieda P]

Same here. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

charming was your repertoire
it left me breathless on the dance floor...

I think I can say this is how your collaboration has made me feel... ;) This is a piece with whirling images, sensual and romantic at the same time.

ariose shadows move in time upon the wall - this is an awesome line - A+ for word use and imagery!

Great teamwork, Frieda and Jack!

[Frieda P]

Love your review Rita, especially since you picked one of each of our lines. ;-) Thanks so much!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) I'm diplomatic even when I don't know it! This really is a great poem, and both of you shine in it!

[Frieda P]

Yes you are, I'm sure it has something to do with rainbows & unicorns. lol....thanks again, enjoy your weekend! :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks Rita, but all I did was play the tuba while Frieda wrote this. I was in an Oompa kind of mood.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah - an oompa kind of mood... is that what we're calling it these days? Jack, I can hear your voice in these lines - and they harmonize beautifully with Frieda's.

[Jack...]

Thanks Rita, but fyi, I was almost in a Mummers String Band kind of mood. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! Now that's the best mood to be in! :) Dancin' in those golden slippers...

[annie lee]

WOW. Allow me to say once again, WOW. This certainly is a provocative, stirring piece of work. Kudos to both of you. This is sensuous, evocative of satin silhouettes floating, hovering just above a lustrous marble dance floor. One of my favorite pieces of classical music is "Bolero" and my reaction to your poem was the same one I have to that piece of music. wow. I need to get a cold sip of something and fan myself vigorously with a ladies' delicate little fan. Thought I was too old for that stuff. It's always nice to feel a little stirring in places one thought long exhausted.

[Frieda P]

Wow, two wows, thanks so much minichinz, your reaction made me smile! :-D

[Jack...]

Make that 3 wows. Thank you so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem ya'll. oh 25 characters my eye

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby, I know never get used to it....glad you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

I don't get it either, there are way more than 25 characters on this site at any one time...I don't know what the hell they are talking about. Enjoyed the Y'all BR, don't get too many of them round here.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem. The violin is my favorite. Allow the music to control the heart and mind. The description took me in and I enjoyed the journey. I enjoyed the energy in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Mine too Coyote, it's so affecting, thanks so much for your sentiments here.

[redflutterby]

Perfect poetic pair up....not surprising though. Two of wcs most loved writers make beautiful music together. What else can I say....

[Jack...]

Thanks Red, but Frieda just invites me to write with her every once in a while and lets me ride on her coat tails because she feels sorry for me.

[Frieda P]

Pay no attention to that man behind the curtain! Thanks Red, you know Jack is great at this sort of thing, jazzed you enjoyed it.

[SyberRose]

A scintillating tease to the senses...beautifully penned Frieda and Jack...Loved it...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rose, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you Rose. It just goes to show you how good a man can look when he has a beautiful woman on his arm.

[s y e]

Wow, my two favourite people did a breathtaking poem. How lucky are we? This is great, guys. I really enjoyed it, the music was perfect. The wording was spectacular, spectacular. Amazing imagery, too.

"You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro
I bend to your chords with lusty allegro"

~~ ooooooft, wow! It's a little hot in here. ;-)

If I could, I'd dance for the both of you and because this was fabby, but I can't.

~ Noodlebumble x

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks noodlebumble, you know I wasn't sure how it'd go with your Jackomantic... ;-) We had fun with this collaboration, jazzed you enjoyed it!

[s y e]

Ahah, 'my' Jackomantic. ;-) Well I loved it, my two fave people! x

[Jack...]

Thanks so much New Doll. Now you know, just let a beautiful butterfly land on my shoulder and even I can look good.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. What a nice and lovely collaboration of poetry , music , rhythm of beautiful words and words along with the dances of the two hearts bringing us life and love to this site and above all cheers of friendship ...Bravo

[Jack...]

Psst Sami...it was mostly her. Thanks so much.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sami, he's so humble, I started it, he finished it, we made a fine team I think! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are or both welcome...:)