~Dark Side of the Moon

Collaboration with Jack, needless to say, he's the light side.

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Stunning collaboration, Frieda and Jack both!! Both of you have composed some incredible imagery for this piece (which I happen to be partial to in poetry).

Jack, I love your "dark side," so to speak, with its "deeper shade of black devoured your soul." And just as much, Frieda, I love your "light side," with its "fireflies flicker," and "tears evaporate in reflected heat," and "dawn's sweet zephyrs on jeweled beams." What an intense combination of positive/negative images, so romantic, loving, and adventurous!!! Ooh, I'm just gushing. :-P

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed this collaboration, but Jack was the light, you know where that leaves me ;-) Thanks muchly Eric....!

[ron]

Wow. This is realy good.I like the way you presented it marowing down as the dark ends then widening out at the end for the lighter side.

[Jack...]

Ron, thanks so much for stopping by. Any chance I get to write with Frieda I consider a gift.

[ron]

Your welcome. If you find some one to write with than it is a blessing indeed

[Frieda P]

Jack is a blessing, thanks so much for your kind review ron....

[ron]

It was my pleasure reading.

[Angi]

This is such a beautul piece. The words, the form, the flow. I laughed reading the description! Ha! Nicely done, Frieda and Jack! Angi~

[Jack...]

Angi, your kind words always brighten the day. Thank you so much.

[Frieda P]

Ha well I had to give Jack his due, he makes even the dark side of the moon bearable! Thanks Angi.

[prachi prangya agasti]

so nice and amazing lines... hats off... loved it...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Prachi

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille prachi, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Vikrantsingh]

Frieda my friend.. You are so simple with your worlds and understanding on such a great topic
I'm so pleased I got 3 read request from 3 different poets here on WC.
I must admit you have all of them falling for your excellence and wonderful though flow.
They way you wrote this is so unique. I love the way you present it.
Masallah (Bravo)
You made me stop and read this 4-5 times I will share this poem with my friend and colleagues at work :)
Keep sharing such poems.. Well done :)
- Singh :)
100/100

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I loved writing this with an amazing poet like Frieda. much appreciated.

[Frieda P]

Wow, I'm humbled Singh, thanks so much for your kindness and friendship always my dear friend. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good music and outstanding poetry. The moon allowed us to dream and write. Pink Floyd took us to the dark side and make us want to stay. Thank you for the music and the poetry.
Coyote

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend for your kind words to us. Frieda is so talented and any chance I get to write with her I jump at.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your insightful review John.

[Cassie]

whispering in feathered sonnets of melodic lyrics calming

illuminating my heart in showering sparks of the happy memories

Totally out of words, this is amazing!!!

[Jack...]

Cssie once again the sun shines on me...thank you so much. Frieda always makes me look good.

[Cassie]

And you are good Jack. Frieda that is good work there

[Cassie]

And you are good Jack. Frieda that is good work there

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Cassie, you're too kind!

[SteveB]

Great images, great layout and a solid collaberation.
Although I have to say Frieda that with the first line I had forgotten Pink Floyd and was stuck with Procul Harum.

I think collaberation is a very hard thing to due as each writer has to not only create but create in such a manner as to compliment and complete the other. You did that here.

[Jack...]

Thanks Steve, she is an amazing poet to work with.

[Frieda P]

Procul Harum would have worked just as well, thanks Steve for your kind review.

[Rhiti Bose]

Intense, richly crafted, mesmerising.... Wow Frieda, you are an amazing poet. A review will be too small for this poem. Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Wow Rhiti, thanks so much, I also have Jack to thank for making this one complete.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful collaboration.. I love the juxtaposition of the dark and the light.. all my favorite words that I associate with you two.. butterflies, zephyrs, indigo, the moon, sonnets.. gorgeous work here!

[Jack...]

Thank you Lori. I appreciate your kind words about our poem.

[Ravyne Hawke]

You are most welcome, Jack.. gorgeous collab!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for your kind review Lori, glad you enjoyed this one.