~Long Pauses~

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

you give such a deep look at your passion! It's almost like memories jumping into the air. ...landing as small kisses trailing down the senses.Long pauses to let us know we are still breathing.I almost want to close the curtains as I read this for it makes me feel naked. you have done your job well here Frieda! Superb!

[Frieda P]

Oh my I almost missed this magnificent review from you Queenie, thanks so much, you've made my day more joyful!

[SyberRose]

Lovely pauses to savor as the fragrance of your words took us to the soft whispers in your dream Frieda...Rose

[Frieda P]

'Fragrance of words' I like that Rose, thanks!

[eglantine]

Lovely desire in this poem, I'd cut out "and blossomed desire" though, too many syllables in that last line compared to the rest of the poem's lines. Also it would be a lovely image to end on. Thank you for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks eglantine, yes, it might be too many syllables but it's the essence of the poem in my mind....glad you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

The beginning draws the reader in to a great treat of love , passion , scented magnolias , and visions shared...Splendid as always ...:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly my friend. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)

[Frieda P]

You know I love it when you say that. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:).....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

As always...those captivating words from Frieda. This is a wonderful piece, but still I can feel that sadness in these lines:
"You haunt my dreams
in long pauses of nightfall"
"one sweet day to revisit "

How long is a night to feel the memories once more and then realize it's only a reminiscence?
Well-penned, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Very long night Dhaye, thanks so much for your thoughts here...

[Tom]

Beautiful indeed, love never dies, if anything like good wine.. it sweetens with time !

This certainly strikes the relevant chord !

[Frieda P]

Yes, love & fine wine, sounds like a plan to me Tom, thanks!

[Tom]

Always a great combination & leave the rest per chance !!!

[Firestone Feinberg]

What a beautiful poem frm a beautiful person!

[Frieda P]

Awh, you're too sweet Dave, thanks so much!

[Ken Simm.]

The epitome of romance. And a world of a poem.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille my friend....

[luviva]

that is touching and heart warming!
nice write..

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed luviva, thanks.

[Horizon K.]

How utterly romantic... long pauses of nightfall... aspiring to dusty shelves... Yes, feelings like this, should be breathed in slowly, remembered, the delicate blue of passion's flame... another beautiful piece from you Frieda... I love your poetry in this place...

[Frieda P]

"delicate blue of passion's flame', love that Horizon! Thanks so much my friend....

[Horizon K.]

Lol... You moved me poetic;)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, always a good thang! ;-)

[Angel]

What a lovely vision of love shared...you have touched my heart with this one. Beautiful write, Sweetie, I am, as you always put it, "jazzed"...

[Frieda P]

Awh, best compliment ever Angel, thanks!