~Intent

Revel in your grace

take flight in the dance

bask in the sun

soak in salty sea of tears

sob for the plight

bathe in euphoria

exalt well-being,

stir in sensuality &

vital force of musicality

ascending the heavens

precious as air's

vehement breaths

Bemused poesy

staining the skin

penetrating the heart

absorbed within ardent spirit,

life revealed before our eyes

folded over neatly

waiting to be heralded

recognized by mankind

Ink permeates the page

floats unto the soul

of all those who listen 

intently....

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The musicality of this dances off of the page. It's beauty fills the air:

Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind

Simply gorgeous!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anne, jazzed you enjoyed this one!

[Corset]

I think this is my favorite of yours so far Frieda, it's so elegant and glides across the tongue. I especially like the advice inside it that almost whispers approval of a way your inner being is waltzing to an unheard melody, sure laugh it up, but I loved this, and I think you've reached something "more" with this one, not that all of your work isnt top notch, it's just more somehow, maybe just more to MY liking, lol

[Frieda P]

So jazzed Corset, glad you saw something 'more' in this one. Perhaps if poets ruled the world we'd finally have peace and harmony, what do you think? lol ;-)

[Corset]

quite right! Poets need to have free reign over the affairs of this world, then everything would be colorful and smell like sonnets :P

[Lydia Shutter]

A philosophical beauty of a write. So inspirational! You truly have a lot of poetic talent, Frieda. Always a pleasure reading you. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Oh thank you so much Lydie, you're too kind my friend...

[Pryde Foltz]

Wow! This is an impressive one. Beautiful and extraordinarily well-penned.

[Frieda P]

Getting a wow from you is impressive Pryde, thanks so much....

[Sami Khalil]

You poems permeate all the senses with love and inspiration where you tickle even minds to love imagining the endless possibilities music and its effects on souls and how both will ascnd to the heavens...Splendid...:)

[Frieda P]

Wow Sami, a splendid review indeed, thanks muchly :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Keith]

Inspiring uplifting poem Frieda. Love that last stanza, indeed we get more out of a poem such as this if linger to soak up its message.

[Frieda P]

I concur Keith, thanks muchly....

[Keith]

Your presentation is awesome, it make the experience complete, I forgot to mention that.

[Tom]

Be proud and embrace life firmly with both hands!

Another rousing, distinguished poem ! Have you already opened that bottle of bubbly Frieda ? (without me)??

[Frieda P]

No, never Tom, waiting on you, thanks for this great review....

[Jack...]

"Know that in this soul lives music, for without music there is no soul"

Frieda, to fill our eyes with the beauty that is your words is likened to 1000 songbirds serenading us as we read. Melodically flow you words in this beautiful poetic offereing. Indeed, your poetry definitely penetrates our hearts, allowing us to feel and understand the amazing beauty that is you.

Very nicely done my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Is that another Jack quote, it's luverly. Your review is poetry to my ears, thanks so much my dear friend....

[Jack...]

Yep, yep, yep...it is.