~Moonlight Sonata To the Boudoir~

Speak to me in tender hushes of Chantilly lace

and the scent of black orchids in reason

wrap around my every sense so I might beg of thee,

take my hand gently and promenade me

for this dance of gentle embers burning

will surely swoon and seductively entice me

within the nectar of your tongue

and your refined humble graciousness

doth be kind my sweet,  feel mine luster ablaze

thou shan't not be regretful of salvation  

for with such gentlemanly verve of swagger

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir

wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz

hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors

I shall surrender my very soul to thee

on a bed of thorned roses inkind 

plunge me deeply into passion's flower

of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

Author's Note

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

The main difference between you and Beethoven Frieda is that you manage to blow my mind all the time when this is one of the only songs from Beethoven that move me. yes i said it this is my favorite Beethoven song and you are more consistent than him

for this dance of gentle embers burning
will surely swoon and seductively entice me
within the nectar of your tongue
and your refined humble graciousness

....my favorite part of this piece where the climb starts and the poem begins to exceed itself and live up to its potential if i'm being clear..really please tell me if I'm rambling

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir
wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz
hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors
I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

A non other but a totally badass ending that makes the previous my favorite quote from the piece. ties it together so the thought is complete and your intentions are focused instead of scattering themselves in a reader's mind . all in all a poem to be loved. well written, well captured, well done.
per usual

[Frieda P]

Wow Deron, I'm enthralled by your review here, don't know what to say, thanks so much my friend....x

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice poem... great use of imagery... breathtaking...

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille prachi, glad you enjoyed this one....

[Mark]

Very nice very Victorian.

[Frieda P]

Yes, who knew, thanks Mark....

[Leslie Philibert]

I am reading lots of fine writing today...this has Frieda`s very rich imagery combined with thought.
Fine job.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Leslie, much appreciate your kind words...

[Nkosana B Masuku]

This poem left me completely breathless,what a beautiful write stricking to the core especially the ending " I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless
blossoms"

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks Nikosana, really jazzed you liked this one....

[Nkosana B Masuku]

This poem left me completely breathless,what a beautiful write stricking to the core especially the ending " I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless
blossoms"

[Nkosana B Masuku]

This poem left me completely breathless,what a beautiful write stricking to the core especially the ending " I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless
blossoms"

[Frieda P]

I know I left a review for this one, gremlins again I guess...thanks so much for your gracious review, your kind words are appreciated Nkosana....

[Yellow Butterfly]

Frieda....... what a beautiful poem you have penned here so exquistely....you have caught me off guard with this enchanting poem....

Breathtaking........

ps: Can I tell you that my niece was born two weeks ago...and she's called....... BLOSSOM!!

[Frieda P]

What a gracious review YB, thanks so much, and ha...great name!! Congratulations Auntie...x

[Angi]

It takes one to know one! A dirty girl that is! You just have yours all enrobed in Shakespearan old English! This is still fiery hot, Missy! ;P Angi~

[Frieda P]

Haha you think you have the market cornered on alter egos? ;-) And don't ask me where the old English came from, must have been a past life! Thanks Angi....

[redflutterby]

Did someone mention dirty girl?? Are u all taking about me again?? Lmao...;-pp

[Angi]

Ha! I was so innocent when I joined the Cafe....

[Frieda P]

Ha she's a comedian too....

[Marie]

How gladly I would dare all his thorns...

[Frieda P]

Wow Marie, I'm elated, I know you don't do love poems...

[Lydia Shutter]

An elegantly sensual write, Frieda. Classic! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Lydi, thrilled you enjoyed this one!