~Tango'd Fantasy~

You breathe

delerium into me

knock me

 off balance

disordered 

maddened bliss

trip the musica

 of ardor'd fusion

intensity and verve,

 

dimensionality's

 tango

dance me to insanity

trip my light fandango

dip me to new heights

in your persuasive sensuality

   ~I'm swept away in your vital essence

Author's Note

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, this is a sensory explosion....absolutely love it. Thank you for every nuance of this poem....from the architectual shape of the words in the poem to mimic a tango dancer, to the irresistible music of the tango dancing....it just all goes together to say "Wow!" Love it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you caught on to the shape also, still haven't found anyone who knows how to tango! Muchly appreciate your kind words.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This sensual dance has swept me away...captivating an intriguing dimension of music and play....

I love the ambience you have created with this elegant write.

l'amore e passionale!!! Well penned, bella!!~xoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

I can't let you have all the fun cara! haha, grazie mille bella ;-)

xoxox

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh you bring it, bella!! ;)

Awesome write!...there's plenty of fun to be had....~xoxo~

[Yellow Butterfly]

your words are as alluring and as captivating as the video..... a wonderful collaboration ofbeautiful diction meets imagery...


Very sensual indeed... :O)

[Frieda P]

Merci beaucoup YB, glad you enjoyed my dance ;-)

[Justaguy]

Somehow, I think this is much more than dancing you describe. And I like it!

[Frieda P]

Whatever do you mean? ;-)

[Justaguy]

Well, there ARE different forms of....dancing.... ;)

[Frieda P]

Yes there are, tango, fox trot, rumba, jazz, ballet, can can, folk, hula, sound like that scene in Forrest Gump with the shrimp lol... ;-)

[Justaguy]

LMAO! he had a few shrimp dishes for sure...lol. But I think there are just as many ways to "dance", as there are to Dance...lol. ;)

[Frieda P]

There should always be a dance in your Dance, if you know what I mean. ;-)

[Justaguy]

Oh, I know exactly what you mean Frieda. What is dancing, without some Dance? ;)

[Frieda P]

Pedestrian...

[Justaguy]

I could not agree more....