~Tango'd Fantasy~

You breathe

delerium into me

knock me

 off balance

disordered 

maddened bliss

trip the musica

 of ardor'd fusion

intensity and verve,

 

dimensionality's

 tango

dance me to insanity

trip my light fandango

dip me to new heights

in your persuasive sensuality

   ~I'm swept away in your vital essence

Author's Note

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, this is a sensory explosion....absolutely love it. Thank you for every nuance of this poem....from the architectual shape of the words in the poem to mimic a tango dancer, to the irresistible music of the tango dancing....it just all goes together to say "Wow!" Love it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you caught on to the shape also, still haven't found anyone who knows how to tango! Muchly appreciate your kind words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Getting lost in moments like that is the only ay to enjoy them... very sultry and fun.

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed, thanks Tas. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure Moonbeam.

[David Scott]

Delightful!
You know I'm a sucker for the Tango! So very sexy.
I've been trying to get across the crowded room all day to dance a little with my dear friend Frieda...
Ahhhh it was worth the wait. ;)

[Frieda P]

Can you actually Tango?

[David Scott]

No dear. It is my fantasy to dance the Tango...
I only ever learned the Martial arts and gymnastics...
I'm a good learner and I know your a good teacher. ;)

[Frieda P]

Darn! You would have been perfect then. ;-) haha I meant to say thanks hon.....

[Kelly Scheppers]

I lost my train of thought while watching this video...almost choked on my coffee! My goodness, may I quote your opening? "...you breathe delerium into me."

You razzle dazzle with such provocation, Frieda! I love it!

[Frieda P]

Haha I know, right? I'm glad someone else was as enthralled with it as I was! You're too kind Kelly, thanks so much for your gracious words...

[Lucy]

very nice done. i liked it

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lucy...

[Rita L. Sev]

A tango of words, like the dance itself vibrant and sensual! :)

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed Rita, thanks :-)

[icelandicblue]

Another piece that dances with sensuality across the page:
dip me to new heights
in your persuasive sensuality
~I'm swept away in your vital essence

Viva la difference!

[Frieda P]

Ha I didn't know you were French Anne, thanks so much...

[Joyce S. Greene]

Your poem's movements mirror the movements of the dance you describe, Frieda. And your graphic and video are fantastic, too. A wonderful package from a wonderful poet!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your gracious review Joyce!

[Jack...]

May I have this dance?

Exotic, the Tango, two melt together as one, flowing as a cohesive shadow upon a jeweled dance floor, forgetting the world as they make love to the music, heated passion to the sweltering music, fancy footwork in choreograph sensuality. Your poem my friend brings life to this embarce movement of a man and woman. Very nicely penned.

[Frieda P]

Tell me you can Tango too....? Thanks muchly Jack.

[MsJewel]

A sensual dance of love and romance. Like your ending..I'm swept away..Lovely my friend! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed Julie :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Very captivating - great job Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tarry....

[Tarry Franck]

my pleasure