Flutterby Tears Senryu

Flutterby Tears Musings

upon saddened eyes

spun a golden butterfly

fluttered memories

Reviews

[s y e]

This is such a heart wrenching Senryu, Frieda - The broken heart of a beautiful butterfly. This is sad, and brought me near to tears but very good.

[Jack...]

Sorrow on the wings of a broken hearted butterfly. Nice but sad my sweet friend

[Marie]

Lovely senyru...a golden, fluttering flutterby...

[lee von cleef]

Transformation patterns push the winds of a soul, all in a butterfly Kiss.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sad, but so beautiful.....

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. A beautiful write, heartfelt and poignant. Lovely presentation. A skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Perfect syllabic form of 5/7/5. Excellent use of brevity. Vivid imagery. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. I love the aha moment of line three. Powerful. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Laminators Dubai]

its helplessly full of sadness...its a golden write...
thanks for sharing the words...