`Poetic Dust

Sort of a Tanka just for fun...

New fangled sandwich

forget two slices of cheese,

not my cuppa tea

if i die before i wake...

make me poetic dust please

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL I Love this!!.... Steve said it...this is "Priceless"! :D
Could we be more out there?.... I doubt it. ;P

I'm wondering like everyone else... "What are you smokin' today?"...(and can I have some?) :D

Keep it coming Friedalicious!...just not in my sandwich~xoxoxo~ :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha Robbie, every once in a while you just have to let crazy rip........! LOL, thanks muchly, ha I think it's in your beloved potato chips girlfriend. ;-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

No wonder I'm feeling crazy-hazy lately...It's because of you! lol ;P

[writing mojo]

very intriguing and perfect in every way atomically misdirected....great piece

[Frieda P]

Thanks mojo, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

Now this is funny, but right on. "make me poetic dust please." Wouldn't that be cool if that were the case? Very cool Frieda.

[Frieda P]

You never know, right? Want bacon with that Jack?

[Jack...]

Crispy please.

[Sami Khalil]

Funny , witty and creative...Bravo...
I guess the wind of fate will carry you to lovely places I hope or to a blissful one...:)

[Frieda P]

Ah blissful one would be so nice, thanks Sami :-)

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome muchly....:)

[Tam Warink]

..land on my sandwich and you're liable to be consumed before I notice and grant you safe passage elsewhere! Frieda, you do go on. I'm glad I don't need a ticket for most destinations otherwise I'd be flat broke before sunset.

[Frieda P]

Ha laughing here Tam, glad you gobbled it down my friend.

[kublakhan27]

LOL Priceless Mrs.R. I thought you would get a kick out of it, I didn't know it would inspire you this much ;P I'm glad it did though. Your lines still would have been awesome even without the image accompaniment. Great job my friend ;) xo

[Frieda P]

LOL Benji, thanks again, I told you that you didn't have to be stoned to find that one hilarious...hahaah ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Hahaha Very true ;) xo

[redflutterby]

Lmao....uhmmm what were you smoking when you wrote this hun? ;-pp

[Frieda P]

Hahah nothing, isn't it pathetic that my mind naturally works that way? LOL ;-P

[redflutterby]

Ha...or its poetic genius! xo

[Rita L. Sev]

Poetic space dust... in my sandwich. Ok, now I can think of nothing except whose dust I have been ingesting... A curious pondering here, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ha a curious thought & image, I had to take it somewhere...hahah, thanks Rita!

[Dye]

My god that's a bizarre poem. Not yours, the one that inspired you. LOL My mind is traveling to the gutter just thinking about a Frieda sandwich. But I won't go there. hahaha xoxox

[Frieda P]

LOL I thought so too, imagine reading it stoned....haha, thanks Dye! xo

[Dye]

LMAO--- My mind went a few different places with this one, but I'm trying to behave. I'm in a frisky mood tonight and could get myself in trouble. lol

[Frieda P]

Hahahah I'm not even touching that LOL!!! ;-)

[Dye]

Smart.....we don't want to have a blue ball situation!! hahaha

[Frieda P]

LMAO........................!

[redflutterby]

I'll go there...lmao!!!

[Dye]

Hehehehe-----and that's why I like you guys so much. lol