Honestly Kidding

it's totally nothing...

These poetic issues are full of antithesis

consistently random at best

no means yes to friendly enemies

personal business is as public opinion

it's all pretty badass, now and then...

an adult child speaks invalid relevance 

the big baby in a dark comedy

mild enthusiasm of a life denied,

constant ambivalence of brief speeches

this chilling fever has risen in acute apathy

of confirmed rumors by current history

equally diverse in the same difference

whilst the walking dead, accept rejection

burning cold in their blind sight

sigh to a clearly ambiguous sad smiley, 

yet everyone generalizes a beautiful disaster,  

odds are even, my head is seriously insane

living deceased what a crime, the future is today

honestly kidding...No comment

Reviews

[David Scott]

It is the nothing that totally matters as well...

Ok, you are in a zone lately. I like how sharp the mind feels behind this write. I do not see any weakness in the write. Every line could be used to launch deep discussions. The mixing of opposites that are meeting again on the other side in the beaker of life.
Amazing write!

[Frieda P]

Yep, seems nothing is always 'something' when you think about it....I like 'in the zone' although it hardly felt that way, thanks so much Scott!

[Tom]

Its a bit Alice and Wonderland Frieda, where everything is not what it seems ? Then again therein lie the clues to a way out of this mysterious world !

I wonder ?

[s y e]

You know, I had to use the dictionary again for this one, LOL - You and your 'big words' ha. This is a very sharp write, I loved it.

[Dye]

Say What??? Loved every oxymoron in this!! Even with the flu you come up with something this brilliant, it's crazy how good you are.

[Frieda P]

Lol Dye, snarky doesn't go away just cause you're sick, you should know that....haha besides, it's a helluva cheaper than therapy!

[Dye]

Hahaha-- good point. lol

[Lydia Shutter]

There are plenty of big babies on line and since WC is the microcosm of a macrocosm, well, it follows it would happen here too. Acute apathy? Love that concept. You have a lot of contradictory phrases in this one....and your vocabulary is stellar. I have a sad smiley when I have to deal with a few of the two- faced forked tongue obsequious bologna spouting from some of the fingers of WC members. I find the block feature is soooo rewarding when this happens. Smiling at your soapbox poetry....it is very good. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

"two- faced forked tongue obsequious bologna" now why didn't think of that?! Ha, I'm having t-shirts made up with that saying, would you like one in red Lydi?! This came up on live feed and I immediately grinned....thanks my friend! ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

I would like it in red with sparkled letters...absophuckinlutely! :) Glad to make you smile. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Flashing neon if that's your preference, you got it! ;-)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I have been absent and as I stumble back into a writers reality find all is different but still right where I left off. Strange that the day seems to be writing scattered moments all messages that I can understand even when I don't speak the native tongue...all well no matter I am only babbling now. I have missed your words...so telling and as usual I have no complaints but that you are BRILLIANT and I am but an inkling next to your talent.

[Frieda P]

Nice to see you again Queenie, thanks for your kind words my friend....

[Just Jayren]

I think my head just imploded then reasembled to reflect my former face...

This is very sociological, which makes it impossible to interpret by anyones standards...

Besides that very clever almagamation of wording here

[Frieda P]

Ha, great review, first of its kind, thanks Jayren....

[Ken Simm.]

Good work from the Oxymoronic department. The school of Unknown Personalities and Unused Quotations.
What I really like here is the way that you eschew obfuscation throughout.

[Frieda P]

Well I didn't want to confuzzle anyone by espousing elucidation, thanks Ken....

[Mehak Mushtaq]

You have a very rich vocabulary, Frieda. Kudos to this one.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Mehak.

[Einstein Noodle]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrgh! going to chew the corner off my blankie now... :)) love this humor!
E.

[Frieda P]

Laughing at your genius Einstein....!