`perhaps~

...perhaps, it was a pause

     yet, it felt as though an eternity

   an explosive quiver in the moment

       sending shivers up my spine

 the intensity of our

   moonlit raptur'd intentions

 quiet sentiments

         adorning me in silken scarves 

 we danc'd upon each other's soul

   a slow and steady waltzing of the heart

 our spaces filled

       of sparkling champagne kisses

            & burgundy night's ardor'd desires

 impulses of two connected 

      whimsy'd forbidden forces

  spirited play of lovers vaulted us

            to another essence of time

 those were the days of seductive

               surrender'd secret interludes

   mirror'd in unearthing of abandon'd 

                      affection's sentiments

  we breathe in our darkly promis'd persuasion 

                     til the judgement day call'd

Author's Note

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Judgement the taste of dirt sweet soil old vine right between maidens toes white oak cask char only showing on the inside tannins makin her breath heavy, her voice rolling with the ocean of promiscuity promises pierce her tongue. Perhaps.......

[Frieda P]

Perhaps she calls it something other....

[redzone]

I think it was Oscar Wilde who wrote, "we live in the gutter, but some are looking at the stars" and I couldn't help but think this as I read your dreamy poem, "perhaps" this could just be possible, "perhaps" ... interludes... surrendered secrets... Frieda, your muse lives wildly in your heart.... ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Smart man Oscar...thanks, so many perhaps, nothing perhaps about this review, I'm positive I love it, thanks curt....

[Mark]

til the judgement day call'd. Damn endings. They always come too soon. Except when they are too late.

[Frieda P]

True that, thanks Mark...

[Rita L. Sev]

Passion-filled and richly imaged, Frieda - you write from the soul...

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita, the greatest compliment a poet could get!

[Shaun Payton]

Some fine writing here Frieda. Passion from the soul speaks a lifetimes volume. More than a caress and kiss,.touch someones soul and their passion swells over.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your sweet review Shaun.

[Shaun Payton]

You are very welcome Frieda.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Another delightful read, full with so many memorable lines, I don't know where to start. Excellent!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your glowing words Gleb, much appreciated my friend!

[Giggling Star]

I'm putting this one in my library Frieda. A beautiful, passionate write!

[Frieda P]

Woo, thanks so much stargazer!

[Giggling Star]

...................:)

[Troy Henson]

Beautiful imagery here Frieda. The flow of this one worked well. When true love is found it needs heart and soul and certainly found it in this piece.

Regards

[Frieda P]

Thank you for your kind words Troy, muchly appreciated.

[Rod Dangers]

some incredible lines here, a real deep vocabulary and used so well. You definitely have a signature style with your layout and lines. Something to be proud of. Thank you for sharing.

[Frieda P]

You're too kind Rod, thanks muchly.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great music and very nice poetry. The wrong things can feel so good. Hard to stay away.
"burgundy night's ardor'd desires
impulses of two connected
whimsy'd forbidden forces"
No weakness in the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote.

[SAYED THANGAL]

highly romantic and deep
sayed

[Frieda P]

Thank you sayed.