Don't piss off the muse...

Don't piss off the muse...

A Poem by Frieda P

Madness rules the pen,
   freedom of speech
         not even a concept
what the muse says goes,
  just give in to the inky blows,
     dip that quill in bloody tears
  color it with apricot custard dawning's
    ravage erotica's blissful yearnings
       crack a rib on that funny bone
if you fight the urges,
   you'll end up on the chopping block
    writer's imagination arrested
don't piss off the muse, 
        
'tis  a woefully dreaded plight indeed...

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
'Angry Muse'~Argos Etchings & Paintings

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A mass of words is the writers' Mind Puppeteer . without IT we're empty, without it we're limp as a leaf in pain. You express what needs to be said, advice well given should be well used. You're the one, missus.

'.. dip that quill in bloody tears ~ color it with apricot custard dawning's ~ ravage erotica's blissful yearnings.. '

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Lovin' mind puppeteer petulia, grazie mille my sweet friend....



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that's right muses are a fickle lot. they love honey and barbeque sauce and the flesh beneath it? Whatever is around.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Often wonder, if it not sanity that guides us, through an insane world, which people refuse to acknowledge this. Or have the truth exposed before them. Just my two cents worth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really relate to the poem. (The music is messing with my typing here. Getting every other letter.)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Really, I never saw that happen, thanks....I think a lot of poets relate to this one :-)
This is so true. Utter madness. I find myself lost in thoughts like these often and I want that song as a ringtone. lol Nice work and thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha, thanks I thought the music was apopos, yep, utter madness indeed, jazz'd you enjoy'd joshua. ;.. read more
Yep! Good advice here for sure. I know I've written a few to vent. LOL!!!! Enjoyed this crafted piece. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Purplerose, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)
I like this: reminds me of the poem I wrote about my muse going fishing.
Yeah, it sucked, but, it's cause my muse was fishing. I have no other excuses.

Put on something red, Muses like red.

Trace

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha will do, mine goes out dancing without me, silly muse, thanks Trace.
Madness
Pain
Ire
Wrath
Love
Blissfulness
and all others

All are muses. Indeed, we are shrouded with muses...

We bleed with our pen when we are bleeding.
We soar with the words when we are in bliss.

Ah -
That is our way of life. Poets.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So it is Belle, thanks so much for pausing and your kind words.
Bravo! If not for the whispering muse, I'd have no words to write with. Excellent job, Freida.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Travis, I agree with you there.
A mass of words is the writers' Mind Puppeteer . without IT we're empty, without it we're limp as a leaf in pain. You express what needs to be said, advice well given should be well used. You're the one, missus.

'.. dip that quill in bloody tears ~ color it with apricot custard dawning's ~ ravage erotica's blissful yearnings.. '

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Lovin' mind puppeteer petulia, grazie mille my sweet friend....

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Tags: muse, poetry, anger, concepts, madness, writer's block

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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