Serendipitous Uncertainties

Collaboration Jack & Frieda Gorgeous piano piece composed by Jack also..........

Logic, never etch'd within love

broken galaxies bent with regrets

star clusters came unglued under pressure

reasoning bit the dust'd path

comet tails exceed the limit

delusional constellations play with fate

staring up becomes looking down

on night path footprints’ maze  

heart's exploded into fragment'd cinders

hanging onto darkly serendipitous uncertainties

waiting for crystal azure skies to sheen upon

twists of destiny's dismal glitz again

still fractur’d moonbeams

broke rank in obsolete formations

collecting emotion’d confessions

draped by black velvet sighs

wishing upon radiant eventide

whilst dancin' amidst twilight's glimmers

waves crashing sympathies last grasp

that dusky nightfall brings us sunrises

once eclips’d by passion’s shade

looking directly upon its hidden glow

wind’d breaths of amber blushing

sing sweet lullabies to morning’s harmony

Author's Note

Reviews

[Justine]

Frieda and Jack...just...WOW.
This is an amazing write, superb opening stanza with metaphor to die for. A sad story of love dripping away, something I can relate to. I havent done the soundcloud thing yet, but I will soon. Just writing in between other stuff. I love your poetry, it's always something unique and interesting. Justine :)

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, thanks so much Justine! :-)

[Jack...]

Justine, your wonderful review has me smiling this morning as I can tell Frieda was yesterday. Any chance I have to work with Frieda is a dream come true for me.

[SyberRose]

A beautiful piece and collaboration from you both...loved the piano too...exquisite...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rose, glad you enjoyed. :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet Rose. Happy you enjoyed our poetic pairing...I know I did. :)

[Laura Harrison]

What a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, we had fun writing it, glad you enjoyed :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[joshua deathdealer]

The piano piece is amazing and sets the mood very well. The poem is just out of this world literally. I love it. The imagery and emotions are breathtaking. Excellent work guys.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much joshua, jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration, I agree on the piano piece.....

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Joshua. Everytime I have the opportunity to write with a poet as amazing ss Frieda it is a true blessing.

[Shaquana Adams]

I absolutely love the word play! Is this poem a result of the collaboration? Well done, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Yes, it's a collaboration with Jack, who also composed the music, thanks Shaquana, glad you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Shaquana.

[Shaquana Adams]

You are both very welcome :)

[redzone]

few things are certain, serendipitous or otherwise.. we get only a few chances to do good before our lives are over, .. enjoyed the music Jack and the feelings expressed in the poem. Frieda, Jack congrats on the collaboration.. very cool. ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille curt, thrilled you enjoy'd our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your kind words on our poem. Frieda is a fabulous poet to write with and pretty damn good looking too.

[redzone]

An inspiration to write poetry to, with and about ..

[Frieda P]

Oh you guys are giving me a big head...keep it up haha ;-) xo

[s y e]

heart's exploded into fragment'd cinders
hanging onto darkly serendipitous uncertainties
waiting for crystal azure skies to sheen upon
twists of destiny's dismal glitz again

You guys are perfect together, honestly, you guys just fit together perfectly; like a missing puzzle piece. This is so romantic. It flows beautifully and the imagery is divine.

Love the song too...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sye...was it Pink? Jack has since composed a piano piece, it's really lovely...

[s y e]

Yes. It's very nice.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Frieda inspires me like none other.

[Lyn Anderson]

A sensual, beautiful, flowing collaboration, once again, challenging and passing my obsessive compulsive disorder - twitch twitch :)

[Frieda P]

An apostrophe compulsion, can you get help for that? haha Thanks KL....

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kindness. Frieda is the beautiful flower in this, I am merely the stem.

[one sky]

I love it. I love it! Well-penned verses and well-chosen music. Good collaborative piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Light, glad you enjoyed!

[Pryde Foltz]

You two make such beautiful music together.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde, Jack should have written a piano piece for this one, he's quite talented...

[Pryde Foltz]

he is …. at that

[Pryde Foltz]

For some reason, I am not getting any sound.

[Frieda P]

Try the link if you want to hear Jack's masterpiece...

https://soundcloud.com/thea-21/serendipitous-uncertainties

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes … that works … you are one talented man, Jack. A new age feel for sure. I love.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Pryde. See how beauty inspires beautiful music?

[Kylie]

Another collaboration. Lovely job you guys, you've hit the jackpot.