Serendipitous Uncertainties

Collaboration Jack & Frieda Gorgeous piano piece composed by Jack also..........

Logic, never etch'd within love

broken galaxies bent with regrets

star clusters came unglued under pressure

reasoning bit the dust'd path

comet tails exceed the limit

delusional constellations play with fate

staring up becomes looking down

on night path footprints’ maze  

heart's exploded into fragment'd cinders

hanging onto darkly serendipitous uncertainties

waiting for crystal azure skies to sheen upon

twists of destiny's dismal glitz again

still fractur’d moonbeams

broke rank in obsolete formations

collecting emotion’d confessions

draped by black velvet sighs

wishing upon radiant eventide

whilst dancin' amidst twilight's glimmers

waves crashing sympathies last grasp

that dusky nightfall brings us sunrises

once eclips’d by passion’s shade

looking directly upon its hidden glow

wind’d breaths of amber blushing

sing sweet lullabies to morning’s harmony

Author's Note

Reviews

[Justine]

Frieda and Jack...just...WOW.
This is an amazing write, superb opening stanza with metaphor to die for. A sad story of love dripping away, something I can relate to. I havent done the soundcloud thing yet, but I will soon. Just writing in between other stuff. I love your poetry, it's always something unique and interesting. Justine :)

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, thanks so much Justine! :-)

[Jack...]

Justine, your wonderful review has me smiling this morning as I can tell Frieda was yesterday. Any chance I have to work with Frieda is a dream come true for me.

[Scott Metro]

You guys are quite the team.....very, very well done.
A cosmic treat...a little love..yes..quite nice.

Enjoyed it....
Scott

[Frieda P]

Oh cosmic treat, I like that, thanks Scott....

[Scott Metro]

:)
S. Wolfy

[kublakhan27]

It's always nice to see two of my dearest friends coming together to produce such wonderful work. When reading collabs, one's natural response (I think) is to pick it apart and try to figure out who said what, but I never feel that urge in the case of you two because the words just flow so well. Nicely done :)

[Frieda P]

Awh you're too kind my sweet friend, and exactly what I do. I"m pretty sure you could pick Mrs. R's out though Benji ;-) Even without a zephyr or butterfly ;-) ... ha x

[kublakhan27]

Hahaha I suppose I could if I really wanted to Mrs.R, but I'm quite content to read it as one piece ;) Always a pleasure. x

[Jack...]

Steve just pick out the most beautiful lines and you will have found Frieda's. Thanks so much my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

When the two of you blend your ink, I am in awe at how your words mesh perfectly. “Black velvet sighs” seem like gasps of breath when “destiny’s dismal glitz” sets in. In the morning, though, everything seems fresh and new. “Sweet lullabies” are ever harmonious. Madame Fate has her own plans....and truly what we think up is of no concern to her. Even when moonbeams are fractured, there is always a radiant eventide...and that is what we need to hold onto. The imagery in this poem is breathtaking, my friends. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration Lydi you picked out a few of Jack's lines, he'll be over the moon too, thanks muchly!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Lydi. To work with Frieda is always a dream come true for me.

[Sami Khalil]

So true for there are so many uncertainties that are dicscovered by accident and colored by amber blushings crashing in the sympathies of dismal destiny. I wonder if all confessions have to be silently emotional...A wonderful romance poem...:).............

[Frieda P]

Good question Sami, seems to be the silent killer of many relationships, thanks my friend :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are right...Welcome muchly...:)....................

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sami. Frieda is a dream to work with.

[Sami Khalil]

You know it...Always welcome...:)...........