Sadden'd violin strings

 sadden'd violin strings

     wreak havoc

         in the torrid rain

 pouring out flutter of hearts

        within melodic aqueous bliss

   whispering unto raven's breath

      dancing upon fire 'tween

           the dewdrop'd baubles

   splashing in spirits of darkly 

         relentless melancholy echoes

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I love Lindsey. I have been a fan of her for a long time. Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I like the way you led the reader into a calm sadness. The violin played with skill. Can steal our heart and mind. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, I can't believe I've only just found her amazing talent...she does wondrous things with a violin.

[Katherine R.]

Beautifully done, Frieda! The whole thing has this wonderful mystic tone to it that just makes me want to hug the words! Great job

[Frieda P]

Ahh mystic, I love that word, thanks so much Katherine!

[Katherine R.]

No problem! I love that word too. I use it a lot.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The imagery here has taken a slight detour form your usual "landscape" like prose, here I find myself in a dream state and I don't want to leave!

[Frieda P]

Ha you like it because it's darkly twisted like you love...sure, stay as long as you like...la mia casa e la tua casa, coffee?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

RED WINE! always red wine!!

[Frieda P]

It's not quite noon here yet, but you got it!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well it's noon somewhere right? x

[Frieda P]

Exactly, a man after my own heart! xo

[Avinash]

I don't think I need alcohol after reading these lines :)

[Frieda P]

Ha saw this pop up on live feed, made me smile, cheers anyway my friend! ;-)

[B-poet]

A very unique & artistic write My dear Frieda. Great work. An intriguing read. Loved the picture as well. It resonates a profound message you've gotten across so well for the reader to comprehend. :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille B, was just visiting your page, where you been hiding out? :-)

[Rachelle]

And yet, the gutters flush out the old
The clouds dissipate
Leaving us with syncopated breaths
As we await the new.

[Frieda P]

Thank you sweetbind, love your poetic response.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This spoke to the worn violin tucked away in the corner of my psyche.

[Frieda P]

I understand that exactly Travis, thanks so much.

[Tai Ryens]

A storm of rain accented by the melody of a violin, a beauty derived from morose situation. I liked the meaning you bring out, well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tai, glad you can appreciate the sullen side too.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Another stunning write Frieda!

Kaze~ :D

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Kazie! :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

:) ............

[Shaquana Adams]

This is beautiful. The music flowed well with it too :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Shaquana. :-)

[Mark]

I really loved the video. Wonder if it ruined her violin to get it wet like that.

[Frieda P]

Good question, she's extremely talented, I'm obsessed with her now.