Sadden'd violin strings

 sadden'd violin strings

     wreak havoc

         in the torrid rain

 pouring out flutter of hearts

        within melodic aqueous bliss

   whispering unto raven's breath

      dancing upon fire 'tween

           the dewdrop'd baubles

   splashing in spirits of darkly 

         relentless melancholy echoes

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I love Lindsey. I have been a fan of her for a long time. Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I like the way you led the reader into a calm sadness. The violin played with skill. Can steal our heart and mind. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, I can't believe I've only just found her amazing talent...she does wondrous things with a violin.

[Brittany Zedalis]

The music goes along with this wonderful poem so well. I love Lindsey Stirling.

[Frieda P]

This is the first I've heard her. love her style, thanks so much Brittany.

[redflutterby]

Sigh....not sure which I love more...your words or the video? Both are magnificent and had my heart dancing in in the rain. A splendid symphony on such a cold winter night! x

[Frieda P]

I know, I was so taken with her, what talent, thanks so much Red, glad you enjoyed this one...yes, sigh. x

[Sami Khalil]

Dancing upon fire , waiting for the rain to extinguish the longing , the flutter of hearts ride the zephyrs but those raven breathes keep calling from the abyss of melancholy. Those sad violin tunes are relentless...Excellent...:)................

[Frieda P]

Relentless, you know it Sami, thanks so much for your insightful review, I really can't get away from your stare now, you made your avatar bigger. ha. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Scott Metro]

A little magic on a Sunday night.
Excellent imagery...a nice plucking and placing of words..
Very smooth Miss Frieda..

Scott

[Frieda P]

Always have to have some magic music on Sunday nights, thanks so much Scott...perhaps some midnight margeritas too.

[Scott Metro]

Have a good night Frieda..... :)
Scotty Wolf

[Lyn Anderson]

A beautiful melodic verse. Great form.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, were you able to watch the video, she's really stellar.

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, I love the accompaniments you choose for your works.

[Frieda P]

Music and poetry just go hand in hand, thanks again...

[s y e]

// pouring out flutter of hearts
within melodic aqueous bliss
whispering unto raven's breath //

OMG Frieda, this is beyond amazing and definitely blew me away. I'm literally sitting right next to you in Jersey, LOL! ;-) But seriously, wow!

And that video is fantastic, how amazing is she!? Blew me away!

RED HOT Flips flops & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

Wooo, red hot ones, doing the happy dance! She's phenomenal, I watched the video and was compelled to write this one, so jazz'd you enjoyed noodlebumble! xo