Bumble on poesy's diaphanous vapors ~‏

For A poet...

prancing about on your

 illustrious painted  words

  finely tuned elusive emotions

      that leap from the heart

 my soul immersed in fine 

   pomegranate wine's 

     effervescence,    glissading   

        upon silken grassy gradients

             of yesteryear's intentions

  romancing the spirit's 

       rhythm'd inclinations

     within this enchantment

         of poetic's

 movements tempo

 inhaling vapor'd affinity of 

   ecstasy's diaphanous illusions  

       bumble'd upon convictions

             confection'd sensibilities

   floating on celestial air's divine

             wafting impulses

    ecstatically dying a little death 

          with each fine tuned melody

    dancing in the cadence of lusty 

             nectar'd blissful notes

                  of poesy's mesmerizing etchings 

                              upon a soulful caress

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Dancing to a tune that's long since dissipated into empty air, and growing tired: each limb aching with every small movement because the dance has gone on for far too long. Dark, but willing, and as you so graciously put it: "ecstatically dying".
Every word was enticing, to say the very least, and the concept is presented in your usual style of a dark concept hidden carefully beneath fluorescent and bubbly words. I enjoyed muchly, well done indeed!

[Frieda P]

Woo I'm doing the darkly florescent dance of bubbly now! Thanks so much Tai.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write my friend.

Kaze~ :-D

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kazie, jazz'd you enjoyed this one. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Blue]

Your wordplay is always amazing, Frieda. When are you going to disappoint? ;)

[Frieda P]

Geez teenage nutter, I was hoping NEVER ;-P

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and held piece that negates the edges of ones mind, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Thomas.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very deep indeed, highly passionate,enjoyed

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sayed.

[Annabelle Lee]

MMMMkay. have you ever been leitamately published, because it would be nice to put one of these in a forensics piece.

[Frieda P]

For me it's therapeutic Annabelle, haven't really considered it. Thanks muchly.

[Rita L. Sev]

my soul immersed in fine
pomegranate wine...

Probably why this poem makes the reader feel like she's floating... an ethereal flow to this piece, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

I think it's Sting, he does that to me too. ;-) Grazie mille Rita!

[Praveeta]

Truly mesmerising piece!! Loved it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Praveeta, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one!

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[MsJewel]

Everything about this poem is stunning Frieda. You never cease to amaze me. An absolute delight to read your words.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Julie :-)

[Antoñyo]

"confection'd sensibilities
floating on celestial air's divine
wafting impulses" ...love it

A wonderfully floating breeze of wordplay

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Antonyo, enjoy your weekend.