In this stillness...

In this stillness...

A Poem by Frieda P
"

that's where I'll meet you

"
In this stillness
      where no breath is audible
where violaceous storm clouds  
           seize the night
beseeching a calmness
                      in its intentions
when compassion flows  
                   into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
                       in man's footsteps,
star's align in perfect symmetry
                              of truth's authenticity
& genuine purity of friendship's
                          faithfulness never falters
in the ether'd dust particles amidst 
               mankind's rising dawn, 
that's where I'll meet you halfway
                         'tween moon's amber light

© 2014 Frieda P


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Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai.



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This is really good...I love it because its true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your visit and review Francesca.
FrancescaX

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Simple, unique and quite refreshing to read, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.
I could feel the spirituality of your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ah spirituality, now you're speaking my language Mike...
Amazing write Frieda! Nicely written.

Kaze~ ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille Kazie :-)
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome Frieda! :)
Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai.
that's where I'll meet you halfway...

That is more the crux of a relationship than love itself... This poem speaks so gently yet with such clarity... Aces, my dear... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille Rita :-)
when compassion flows
into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
in man's footsteps,

There's some imagery. Love love love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pryde.
Awe..this gives a wonderful feeling of love and compassion. "there's a voice that doesn't use words listen" , love is indeed such a powerful experience that it can make you to sense the "silence behind speech" and "speech behind silence" :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So jazz'd that's where it brought you Vani, nice to see you again. You've been missed. :-)
My Favorite part of this and works like it is watching Jacks Heart melt into yours.
I think for every ounce of sadness you ever feel Freida is a gallon full on Jacks heart.

I can't wait till the day someone shouts.. HOMERUN :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


So romantic. Loved it!! This is going as my favourite.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Praveeta....!
Praveeta

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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