Tread'd ripples ~

I tread amidst deep contemplation's ripples

alone in past inky passages of desire

impassioned life flows through my veins, yet

I safely wade upon shallow water's glean

reflections of this shatter'd crystal image

resembling the girl I used to be

thunder in my heart, 

immers'd in a cleansing drizzle 

raining softly in my soul

Author's Note

artwork ~ Steve Hanks

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Now this one has passion ---
in the lines of this verse...
I do like the wordage presented...
and the font for once in a life time...LOL...
I was wondering if you wanted to use:
Cleansing... in the second to the last line...
I see you're a Marilyn fan...
Then I am Arthur Miller...hehehe...
she had a fetish for tall men...

[Frieda P]

Wooo score! Ha finally, I got your stamp of approval on a font. ;) Yes, thanks for the heads up, I did mean cleansing, glad you enjoyed. Thanks muchly Art. ;)

[Shirlena]

Big contrast from the "Choked on the antidote"...much lighter and feels like spring opened up the thought process on this write. Airy and evocative.

[Frieda P]

Funny you should mention, a good friend pointed that out to me too, said after I write a few dark ones, there's always an airy light read, didn't even realize that myself....glad you enjoyed Shirlena, thanks so much.

[A. Amos]

resembling the girl I used to be

I love above line, while reading your work, I was kind of lost in my thoughts, "what kind of girl would be FP?"
I truly loved this elegant write...

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words A...pretty stubborn & defiant I'd say, unlike today ;-)

[A. Amos]

Your full of life my dear and world seem beautiful because people like you exis...you're most welcome

[Frieda P]

You're charming me into another kiss dear ;-) mwah x

[A. Amos]

Just be happy dear rest all is great:) thank you

[Melissa Rose]

Beautiful. That's all. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review Melissa, muchly appreciated. :)